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if the roses were green.
it would be a strange world
if the fish were red and blue.
it would be a strange world
if the sun did not shine.
if the water was black.
if the wind was visible.
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a strange world

Contributed by Goth on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 10:45:18 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

it would be a strange world
if the roses were green.
it would be a strange world
if the fish were red and blue.
it would be a strange world
if the sun did not shine.
if the water was black.
if the wind was visible.
it would be a very strange world.

Copyright © Goth ... [ 2004-08-29 10:45:18]
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Re: a strange world (User Rating: 1 )
by jonbalser on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 11:00:13 AM AEST
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i guess your write it would be a pretty strange would, but then again, change is always good

Re: a strange world (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 11:15:54 AM AEST
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The world is strange enough! Let's not push it any further over the edge. LOL

Rita

Re: a strange world (User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 11:25:09 AM AEST
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Cool...you think like I think. i think

..y'know i really liked this...a lot

Kell x

Sorry im not a very animated critic

Re: a strange world (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:09:22 AM AEST
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Indeed, it would be a strange world!
I can already see "the hostess is grinning,
The guests sleep from sinning..."
-Jim Morrison, wriitten for The Doors,
Strange Days

Keep writing in this vein-let the
Poetic blood flow freely.

Well done!

Re: a strange world (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:09:58 AM AEST
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Indeed, it would be a strange world!
I can already see "the hostess is grinning,
The guests sleep from sinning..."
-Jim Morrison, wriitten for The Doors,
Strange Days

Keep writing in this vein-let the
Poetic blood flow freely.

Well done!

Re: a strange world (User Rating: 1 )
by grim6669 on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 06:14:31 PM AEST
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I LIKE THE WAY YOU WROTE THIS.....AND HOW YOU'RE NOT AFRAID TO NOT RHYME.... YOU DON'T ALWAYS HAVE TO RHYME, ESPECIALLY IF IT'S BEAUTIFUL.....AND THIS IS BEAUTIFUL.

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