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Array ( [sid] => 61781 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => YOUR NEW FACE [time] => 2004-08-29 04:48:45 [hometext] => From the eyes of a kid who loses his best. Had a hard time chosing a good topic. I hope you all like it :) [bodytext] => Why Change your face
For your other fit you well
Why throw away what you are
And keep what your not

Your new face fits you well
Your new friends like to think so
Changed your way for no morals in you
Taking up new "hobbies", whatever you want

So I sit and ponder questions few
Of how it came a change in you
Not happy with yourself for I tell you what
Youll wish you still had your face of what is true in you

So smoke your pot and drink your beer
The parents you yell , they hold you dear
Go with your friends and party it up
Forget this friend never to say wasup

Lose yourself, Forget who you are
Live it up, for later down life youll be drunk in a bar
Give up your education for the parties in school
Give up on your friend just so you can be cool

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 21 [informant] => heartfilledblood [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

YOUR NEW FACE

Contributed by heartfilledblood on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 04:48:45 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Why Change your face
For your other fit you well
Why throw away what you are
And keep what your not

Your new face fits you well
Your new friends like to think so
Changed your way for no morals in you
Taking up new "hobbies", whatever you want

So I sit and ponder questions few
Of how it came a change in you
Not happy with yourself for I tell you what
Youll wish you still had your face of what is true in you

So smoke your pot and drink your beer
The parents you yell , they hold you dear
Go with your friends and party it up
Forget this friend never to say wasup

Lose yourself, Forget who you are
Live it up, for later down life youll be drunk in a bar
Give up your education for the parties in school
Give up on your friend just so you can be cool

Copyright © heartfilledblood ... [ 2004-08-29 04:48:45]
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Re: YOUR NEW FACE (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:04:05 PM AEST
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I know exactly how that goes...I've watched so many people that I know change themselves just to fit in...its so sad how they have to become someone else that they're not...I just wrote something yesterday but I haven't posted it...about this chick I knew for a long time...became a cheerleader and thinks she's better than everyone else..she stopped talking to all her old friends...damn and I even sit right next to her...not even a hi..but hey i don't say hi either...look what she's become...

Re: YOUR NEW FACE (User Rating: 1 )
by longforgottenlove on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 10:17:57 PM AEST
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i completely get that one two of my cousins have been victim to change to be cool my cousin tiff used to be the coolest gal you'd ever meet totally unique now shes like the rest of them shes a cheerleader and class president dating the star of the football team and my other cousin has become a wannabe cholita and it just makes me sad that shes throwing her life away so she'll fit in with her race

much love,
april rose

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