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[aid] => mick
[title] => Nature
[time] => 2004-08-28 14:07:13
[hometext] => My son and I are learning Haiku Enjoy
[bodytext] => Glorious splendor
The world is an oyster
Seek out your pearl.
written together with G-Man
Whisper
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Nature
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Whisper
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 02:07:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Glorious splendor
The world is an oyster
Seek out your pearl.
written together with G-Man
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2004-08-28 14:07:13]
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Re: Nature
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by pixie on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 02:21:52 PM AEST
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very good and you can only get better :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Nature
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 04:47:47 PM AEST
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Nature
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 05:04:05 PM AEST
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Great collaboration and fantastic haiku. They are one of my types of poetry.
Hugs to you both,
Rita |
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Re: Nature
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:17:19 PM AEST
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| very nice haiku, yet this does not follow the 5/7/5 pattern of syllables, or im counting wrong. which wouldnt be surprising =] |
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Re: Nature
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:22:19 AM AEST
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A few words of great positivity, very well done.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: Nature
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:57:53 AM AEST
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That's spectacular!!!Splendid indeed.
I wish you could have read my first entry!
I laugh now.....but at the time, it was not Ball!
Loved it
you are a very fast learner!
Keep up the good work!
Lovingcritters
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Re: Nature
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th January 2009 @ 06:01:26 PM AEST
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Very nice. Haiku is sometimes hard, at least for me. I would consider it 5/7/5 because world sounds like two syllables to me...but then again, I am also sorta deaf. o/O
No matter, I really like this. |
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