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Array ( [sid] => 61656 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dont pretend [time] => 2004-08-28 07:00:33 [hometext] => This is the frist song that i have posted so .. FEEDBACK :-D [bodytext] => Standing Out in the rain,
Whould you help me out,
Dont think i dont know,
Why you always come running to me,

Chours
Dont try to pretend
To put it in the back of your head,
It never works like that,
Iv tryed to forget myself,
Iv burryed my soul inside,
I just cant seem to get away,
Just cant find a place to hide,

It feels like im lost,
I dont know what to do,
Im so scared,
And so confused,

Chours
Dont try to pretend
To put it in the back of your head,
It never works like that,
Iv tryed to forget myself,
Iv burryed my soul inside,
I just cant seem to get away,
Just cant find a place to hide,

The candles have burned out long ago,
Nothing left of my past,
Nothing but a broken mirror,
And iv learned that memory dosent always last,

Chours
Dont try to pretend
To put it in the back of your head,
It never works like that,
Iv tryed to forget myself,
Iv burryed my soul inside,
I just cant seem to get away,
Just cant find a place to hide, [comments] => 3 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 34 [informant] => SkippysAm0r0n123 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Dont pretend

Contributed by SkippysAm0r0n123 on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 07:00:33 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Standing Out in the rain,
Whould you help me out,
Dont think i dont know,
Why you always come running to me,

Chours
Dont try to pretend
To put it in the back of your head,
It never works like that,
Iv tryed to forget myself,
Iv burryed my soul inside,
I just cant seem to get away,
Just cant find a place to hide,

It feels like im lost,
I dont know what to do,
Im so scared,
And so confused,

Chours
Dont try to pretend
To put it in the back of your head,
It never works like that,
Iv tryed to forget myself,
Iv burryed my soul inside,
I just cant seem to get away,
Just cant find a place to hide,

The candles have burned out long ago,
Nothing left of my past,
Nothing but a broken mirror,
And iv learned that memory dosent always last,

Chours
Dont try to pretend
To put it in the back of your head,
It never works like that,
Iv tryed to forget myself,
Iv burryed my soul inside,
I just cant seem to get away,
Just cant find a place to hide,

Copyright © SkippysAm0r0n123 ... [ 2004-08-28 07:00:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dont pretend (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 07:40:26 AM AEST
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Very nice, I liked this song very much.

Thank you for sharing.

Re: Dont pretend (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 07:52:00 AM AEST
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I tried singing it and it seemed GOOD to sing
nice song
well done
cheers!

Re: Dont pretend (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:24:33 AM AEST
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This sounds really beautiful.... I'd love to hear it being sung....
(it could do with a spell check tho)...

Jenni

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