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Array ( [sid] => 61501 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I love you [time] => 2004-08-26 18:27:49 [hometext] => This is to my exboyfriend and it's just a little message to him I hope he likes it [bodytext] => I love you
The day we met,
Was not one to forget.
Even though it was not the sweetest place,
There was a weird connection at first.
Between the two of us we had a secret never to tell
Nobody knew until it was found,
Our secret relashionship
Was destroyed by someone you dated.
It wasn't fair!
I didn't want it to end!
I was happy being with you but noone wanted that.
My mom had a part in it too,
She didn't want me to date you.
She doesn't like you and that sucks
But not now hopefully soon she will forgive you
All I'm trying to tell you is that I love you .
Hopefully you see, you love me too.
I love you with all my heart and one day
The love for you from me will send a message
Whether good, bad
Mean or scary.
All I am saying is sorry and I love you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 2 [informant] => LitaKino [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I love you

Contributed by LitaKino on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 06:27:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I love you
The day we met,
Was not one to forget.
Even though it was not the sweetest place,
There was a weird connection at first.
Between the two of us we had a secret never to tell
Nobody knew until it was found,
Our secret relashionship
Was destroyed by someone you dated.
It wasn't fair!
I didn't want it to end!
I was happy being with you but noone wanted that.
My mom had a part in it too,
She didn't want me to date you.
She doesn't like you and that sucks
But not now hopefully soon she will forgive you
All I'm trying to tell you is that I love you .
Hopefully you see, you love me too.
I love you with all my heart and one day
The love for you from me will send a message
Whether good, bad
Mean or scary.
All I am saying is sorry and I love you.

Copyright © LitaKino ... [ 2004-08-26 18:27:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 06:59:12 PM AEST
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I'm sure he will like it
Keep on writing ;-)

Steve

Re: I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Heartfilledblood on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 07:17:01 PM AEST
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This is very good. Im sorry that it all had to end. Im sure he loves you just the same.

Heartfilledblood

Re: I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 03:57:06 PM AEST
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brilliant poem
im positive he will love it,if not you...
good luck
best wishes hannah xx

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