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what about me?
I hear you, and the things you say
what about me?
I know you,the real you, who you really are
what about me?
I bet you have forgot what you've told me, all the promises
what about me?
I helped you become you,who you are today
what about me?
I watch you leave me behind
what about me....
makes me so easy....
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What about me?

Contributed by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 08:56:09 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I see you when your with them
what about me?
I hear you, and the things you say
what about me?
I know you,the real you, who you really are
what about me?
I bet you have forgot what you've told me, all the promises
what about me?
I helped you become you,who you are today
what about me?
I watch you leave me behind
what about me....
makes me so easy....
to abuse?

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Re: What about me? (User Rating: 1 )
by MLCstar on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 09:01:57 PM AEST
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This is simple but it says so much. Your emotions were screaming through and you touch those of us who have felt similar emotions. Well done

Re: What about me? (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:08:47 PM AEST
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very strong write. I like it!

The Voice

Re: What about me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:39:07 PM AEST
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great write. i agree fully with the other comments. =]

Re: What about me? (User Rating: 1 )
by sheri on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:19:04 AM AEST
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I felt this before too, it stinks.great job expessing it.

Re: What about me? (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 09:53:57 AM AEST
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yes this is a very strong write, filled with emotion,

pixie xx

Re: What about me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:30:40 PM AEST
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holder you dont deserve what you get...I hope things only get better...keep it up keep your head held high I cvan only say that too many time...lol...luv ya

much love,
Dani

Re: What about me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 10:42:52 PM AEST
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I know how you feel, great job!

Jeni

Re: What about me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 12:23:58 AM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel except i don't see it or hear it. I feel it in the pit of my stomach. But the rest of it. I feel EXACTLY that way. I wander if he forgot all the promises that he's told me and everything else this poems says. Excellent write

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