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Array ( [sid] => 60961 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => First Night [time] => 2004-08-22 00:20:30 [hometext] => I was hesitant to submit this because of how personal it is, but I decided to anyway. [bodytext] =>

He leads me by hand to an uncharted place
I'm lost in his world as he explores my face

His fingers flow down my skin like a winding river
Our clothes fall to the floor and my whole body shivers

So gentle is his touch, his kisses like feathers
Chills course through my veins and our lips join together

The night comes alive and the stars catch fire
My emotions have peaked yet he still takes me higher

Then all becomes quiet, not a sound in the air
He kisses my lips, softly touching my hair

Nothing was so beautiful or quite as divine
As the first night our hearts and souls were aligned [comments] => 4 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Stellar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

First Night

Contributed by Stellar on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 12:20:30 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

He leads me by hand to an uncharted place
I'm lost in his world as he explores my face

His fingers flow down my skin like a winding river
Our clothes fall to the floor and my whole body shivers

So gentle is his touch, his kisses like feathers
Chills course through my veins and our lips join together

The night comes alive and the stars catch fire
My emotions have peaked yet he still takes me higher

Then all becomes quiet, not a sound in the air
He kisses my lips, softly touching my hair

Nothing was so beautiful or quite as divine
As the first night our hearts and souls were aligned

Copyright © Stellar ... [ 2004-08-22 00:20:30]
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Re: First Night (User Rating: 1 )
by MnMnMsrcool on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 01:00:58 AM AEST
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omg!! that was sooo sweet i loved it...it was really nice and very well written good job and keep writing

Re: First Night (User Rating: 1 )
by veramouse on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 01:16:04 AM AEST
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fabulous poem , there are some things that are etched into your memory forever, it brought back memories for me...

Re: First Night (User Rating: 1 )
by FiggySue on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 02:54:59 AM AEST
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Perfect! You made it seem so magical, and exciting. Beautiful poem!!!

Re: First Night (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 11:09:42 AM AEST
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i like this one..You and I have alot in common...

AfterDark..

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