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Array ( [sid] => 60936 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Waiting [time] => 2004-08-21 17:50:03 [hometext] => About a boy waiting for the bus that never somes. [bodytext] => Waiting
On a bench with peeling
Green paint
Is where he sits
Every day
Waiting.
Long ago the bus stopped
Making that stop
But every day
He sits there
Waiting.
People gawk
And jeer
everyday
As he
Waits
Though many say that
The bus will never come
Waiting is pointless
They say.
But he still
Waits
Every day
He Waits.
He knows,
Deep in his heart,
That the bus will
One day come.
Until that day,
He will wait.
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Waiting

Contributed by SlimStaple on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 05:50:03 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Waiting
On a bench with peeling
Green paint
Is where he sits
Every day
Waiting.
Long ago the bus stopped
Making that stop
But every day
He sits there
Waiting.
People gawk
And jeer
everyday
As he
Waits
Though many say that
The bus will never come
Waiting is pointless
They say.
But he still
Waits
Every day
He Waits.
He knows,
Deep in his heart,
That the bus will
One day come.
Until that day,
He will wait.

Copyright © SlimStaple ... [ 2004-08-21 17:50:03]
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Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:37:20 PM AEST
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Interesting write...well done.... can picture him sitting there...
Jenni

Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 07:06:00 PM AEST
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At least he had faith. That is more than most people have.

Rita

Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 08:10:04 PM AEST
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How is this insperational??

Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 12:13:24 AM AEST
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I agree with Jenny and Rita, I like this a lot. I can see how this is inspirational, you just have to look past the literal meaning, I like this a lot. Keep writing!
Katie

Re: Waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:00:33 AM AEST
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This seems to be symbolic. The bus must stand for something.
Sometimes things aren't as they seem

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