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To dead to notice that you’re even there
Then I will never be hurt by your lies
Never losing a single tear from my eyes

I long to be numb to the pain
For my heart that you have slain
To no longer be hurt by you
And all of the painful things that you do

I won’t let you take my pride
Even after all of the tears that I cried
You left me wounded and alone
But that pain will never be shown

I won’t let you know that you defeated me
I won’t let you take away my dignity
I thought that you needed me
But now the truth is what I see

I never imagined you could hurt me this much
All I wanted was to feel your touch
But now I realize I was wrong
And now I have to act really strong

I just wish I was to dead to care
To dead to notice that you were even there
But instead I’m hurt by all your lies
So many tears have left my eyes
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To Dead To Care

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 12:24:28 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I want to be to dead to care
To dead to notice that you’re even there
Then I will never be hurt by your lies
Never losing a single tear from my eyes

I long to be numb to the pain
For my heart that you have slain
To no longer be hurt by you
And all of the painful things that you do

I won’t let you take my pride
Even after all of the tears that I cried
You left me wounded and alone
But that pain will never be shown

I won’t let you know that you defeated me
I won’t let you take away my dignity
I thought that you needed me
But now the truth is what I see

I never imagined you could hurt me this much
All I wanted was to feel your touch
But now I realize I was wrong
And now I have to act really strong

I just wish I was to dead to care
To dead to notice that you were even there
But instead I’m hurt by all your lies
So many tears have left my eyes

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-08-21 00:24:28]
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Re: To Dead To Care (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 12:32:07 AM AEST
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This is filled with such emotions.. good write keep it up and dont loose fate. In life some of us have to suffer such as you and myself and many of members of this site. We must try and keep faith...
love always
corrupted_minds

Re: To Dead To Care (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 01:52:40 AM AEST
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hang in there. A heart breaking write

dizza

Re: To Dead To Care (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 04:35:11 AM AEST
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oh such a heart-wrenching poem!
it's so sad.
your poetry skill is excellent!
if writing helps you then NEVER stop!
from deathdrop

Re: To Dead To Care (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 11:44:58 AM AEST
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Too dead to care? I should hope not for indeed to be dead to cares is the death of a soul. I know this out of my character but perhaps it is not to be too dead to care but to not be entombed in your despair. Past hurts exist but just let them be memoris leave your heart alive for other moments to bring to bliss....oh well just my meandering thoughts... but a rather well written write in any case.

Re: To Dead To Care (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 04:03:15 PM AEST
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the actions of others wreak havoc on our souls......does it not?? great write here!!!

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