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Sublime anticipation

Resistance gives way
To insistent persuasion

As flesh separates
To allow penetration

The body’s fluids
Lubricate this invasion

Blood flowing through veins
Multiplies the equation

Repetitious act
Filled with lusting elation

A silent scream is
A throttled emanation

The gasping of breath
Fascinating fixation

The body twitches
In remote animation

Realization
Then frantic desperation

With questioning eyes
That demand explanation

I remove my knife
And its deadly serrations

She was MY daughter ~
Enjoy your destination

( I know you’re out there Tim, I’m coming )
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Act Of Passion

Contributed by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 12:13:39 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Patiently waiting
Sublime anticipation

Resistance gives way
To insistent persuasion

As flesh separates
To allow penetration

The body’s fluids
Lubricate this invasion

Blood flowing through veins
Multiplies the equation

Repetitious act
Filled with lusting elation

A silent scream is
A throttled emanation

The gasping of breath
Fascinating fixation

The body twitches
In remote animation

Realization
Then frantic desperation

With questioning eyes
That demand explanation

I remove my knife
And its deadly serrations

She was MY daughter ~
Enjoy your destination

( I know you’re out there Tim, I’m coming )

Copyright Â© Nazmythian ... [ 2004-08-18 12:13:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Act Of Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 12:22:26 PM AEST
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a very deep, dark write...

pixie xx

Re: Act Of Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 12:44:08 PM AEST
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!!!
whew!
retribution I'll assume...

Re: Act Of Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFawn on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 01:01:44 PM AEST
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Run Tim, RUN!....*shiver*
This is an awesome poem. Very dark and chilling!

WinterFawn

Re: Act Of Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 02:53:26 PM AEST
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Wow! This was a very darkly interesting write. It completely captivated me. I think the last line gave me a chill. The most wonderful thing about this was the fact that you pulled off something few poets can. You continued with one steady rhyme from beginning to end. Not only this, but your rhyme word choices were always excellent, and not bland or cliche.

Excellent Write!!!

Re: Act Of Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 03:56:01 PM AEST
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::shudders:: Such anguish and hate... VERY dark poem, Naz... And I can see why. I understand your pain... People like that don't deserve to live a free life... Excellent flow, and a chilling end... I got goosebumps ::rarely happens:: Perfect expression of angst and loathing... As always, all my love and respects... I hope you are living a brighter life now... No one deserves to live in the shadows, with only suicidal thoughts for comfort... Heart-wrenching, and disturbing... But perfect. Your emotions were eloquently described here.. Loved it. God bless, and peace be thine, mon ami!

Your dearst fleur de souffrance...

Re: Act Of Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by critterhideaway on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 01:24:36 PM AEST
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I love this, I'm sure every father might have these thoughts if they have a growing daughter

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