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Array ( [sid] => 60121 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => why did u fade away [time] => 2004-08-14 14:47:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => maybe she,ll love me when i,m gone
maybe she,ll realise what she has done
maybe she,ll remember how i used to be
before she pushed me away

useless expectations of you
so stupid of me to think
that you cared if i lived or died
so stupid of me to think you ever cared at all
when you made daddy go away
the person you used to be faded and fell away from me

so uncaring and cold
did'nt ever hear an i love you
just leave me alone
you used to say i was the only thing that helped yu carry on
but thse words faded to and never cam again
now you just stare into nothingness
now you can't even look at me
mummy why did you have to fade awy ?


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why did u fade away

Contributed by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 02:47:27 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



maybe she,ll love me when i,m gone
maybe she,ll realise what she has done
maybe she,ll remember how i used to be
before she pushed me away

useless expectations of you
so stupid of me to think
that you cared if i lived or died
so stupid of me to think you ever cared at all
when you made daddy go away
the person you used to be faded and fell away from me

so uncaring and cold
did'nt ever hear an i love you
just leave me alone
you used to say i was the only thing that helped yu carry on
but thse words faded to and never cam again
now you just stare into nothingness
now you can't even look at me
mummy why did you have to fade awy ?






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Re: why did u fade away (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 03:48:51 PM AEST
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This is so very touching and sad.......I am so sorry...
Hugs
Jenni




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