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Array ( [sid] => 59926 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Cold Hearted Hunter [time] => 2004-08-12 19:29:17 [hometext] => I felt like writing about people who disregard peoples feelings, and use them for their own gain..... [bodytext] => There he stands
Looking for a new victim
Wating for his prey
Hiding where no one can miss him

He hunts for the heart of another
He wishes for nothing but their heart
WIth witch he can feed
And play out his unholy part

He chases down the prey
And tells her what she wants to hear
He acts like he cares
He acts like theres nothing to fear

But when the hunter is done with his prey
And theres nothing more for him to gain
He moves on to another victim
And after that, starts over again

There she stands
Looking for her prey
Waiting for a stupid man
To come her way

She knows he likes her
She toys with his heart
She acts as if that great gift
Will make them never part

She keeps him arround
As long as he keeps her with supply
But when his money runs out
Shes not the one who will cry

Shes nothing but a money whore
There is no one for witch she cares
With her body to die for
She has all her leverage right there

The hunters
They bring nothing but pain
They should all go back
To the darkness from witch they came [comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 2 [informant] => kyletycz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
The Cold Hearted Hunter

Contributed by kyletycz on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 07:29:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



There he stands
Looking for a new victim
Wating for his prey
Hiding where no one can miss him

He hunts for the heart of another
He wishes for nothing but their heart
WIth witch he can feed
And play out his unholy part

He chases down the prey
And tells her what she wants to hear
He acts like he cares
He acts like theres nothing to fear

But when the hunter is done with his prey
And theres nothing more for him to gain
He moves on to another victim
And after that, starts over again

There she stands
Looking for her prey
Waiting for a stupid man
To come her way

She knows he likes her
She toys with his heart
She acts as if that great gift
Will make them never part

She keeps him arround
As long as he keeps her with supply
But when his money runs out
Shes not the one who will cry

Shes nothing but a money whore
There is no one for witch she cares
With her body to die for
She has all her leverage right there

The hunters
They bring nothing but pain
They should all go back
To the darkness from witch they came




Copyright © kyletycz ... [ 2004-08-12 19:29:17]
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Re: The Cold Hearted Hunter (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 01:13:09 AM AEST
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Wow very strong write and in many cases with women and men this is unfortunatly the truth.
good work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: The Cold Hearted Hunter (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 08:58:39 PM AEST
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Boy can I relate to this poem. I like how you used the word witch for which very intuitive.




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