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Array ( [sid] => 59840 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I want to run away, the pains to harsh i cannot stay [time] => 2004-08-12 04:13:05 [hometext] => Things are so **** up right now... i just dont know what to do [bodytext] => I want to run away,
The pains too harsh I cannot stay,
Been here to long,
I can’t be strong,
No one even notices I’m there,
No one seems to even care,
Been down this road,
Already carried this load,
It’s like a broken record,
Been through this again and again,
Been left alone without a friend,
Tried to cry but the tears are all gone,
And in my heart you’ll find a thorn,
But I’m crying on the inside,
Too many times I’ve died,
Been torn and tarnished,
Please take this knife,
Before I take my life,
When I get like this,
Without your kiss,
I’m scared of what I might do,
The ocean sounds are calling,
I’ve just been stalling,
The moonlight shows me,
So take this as my final plea,
Don’t condemn another soul,
To the darkness to fall,
Don’t make another feel like me,
And strip them naked for all to see,
Just pick them up, let them fly,
Don’t leave them alone to die,
Let you be their cure,
Make they tarnished heart go pure,
Don’t let another,
Burn and suffer,
Just like I did,
Don’t let them live a lonely lie,
I’ve taken off my mask
Don’t forget, I’m in the past,
Just a distant memory,
But now I am free,

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I want to run away, the pains to harsh i cannot stay

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:13:05 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I want to run away,
The pains too harsh I cannot stay,
Been here to long,
I can’t be strong,
No one even notices I’m there,
No one seems to even care,
Been down this road,
Already carried this load,
It’s like a broken record,
Been through this again and again,
Been left alone without a friend,
Tried to cry but the tears are all gone,
And in my heart you’ll find a thorn,
But I’m crying on the inside,
Too many times I’ve died,
Been torn and tarnished,
Please take this knife,
Before I take my life,
When I get like this,
Without your kiss,
I’m scared of what I might do,
The ocean sounds are calling,
I’ve just been stalling,
The moonlight shows me,
So take this as my final plea,
Don’t condemn another soul,
To the darkness to fall,
Don’t make another feel like me,
And strip them naked for all to see,
Just pick them up, let them fly,
Don’t leave them alone to die,
Let you be their cure,
Make they tarnished heart go pure,
Don’t let another,
Burn and suffer,
Just like I did,
Don’t let them live a lonely lie,
I’ve taken off my mask
Don’t forget, I’m in the past,
Just a distant memory,
But now I am free,

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Re: I want to run away, the pains to harsh i cannot stay (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:52:42 AM AEST
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So much pain and grief within your words, it was like a thousand empty souls screaming for the agony to stop...I see the words feel the images...and feel is if though I am the one being put through, what you are oviously going through.
I dont know if I will be much help to you, but if you ever need someone to talk to, or even to let off some stress or steam, Im more than willing to listen, if that helps.
You really reached out with this write, it was a very heart wrenching write.

Re: I want to run away, the pains to harsh i cannot stay (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 05:07:22 AM AEST
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Great write. deep and moving, it held me in to the end.
Full of emotion and grief, and a load of pain and
heartbreak. It made me feel right there, like i was
feeling the same way.

love always, dizza
xoxoxoxo

Re: I want to run away, the pains to harsh i cannot stay (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 06:05:01 AM AEST
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Your pain and emotion comes through very well in this write. Well done. Keep up the good work!
Thumps ; 0)

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