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This is the first time that i feel alive, this is the last time that i will die. setting this up, making a plan so this never happens again.

so heres to laughter, and late night drinking. heres to all the stupid stuff we used to do, light a match and watch myself burn in my alchohol enduced body. kiss my lips feel it brushing against mine, cant wait until were alone. i swear to god we make the best love. but im selfish, and all i want to please is myself, and yes im selfish but i ***** love the ***** out of you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 48 [informant] => frmpoison2static [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Last Time I Die

Contributed by frmpoison2static on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 09:57:21 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

we are selfish, we are ***** up beyond belief. believe me this time, its not like the others its not a false presentation of myself. held this all in for way too long, as i was watching myself fall off this island onto the shore, i was drowning in my own misery. but i am selfish, and i dont care. its always myself first, im in front of the line. i still care more than most people in this world, i actually care about other peoples feelings. im the sensitive guy, always a tear in my eye. cry until i die...

This is the first time that i feel alive, this is the last time that i will die. setting this up, making a plan so this never happens again.

so heres to laughter, and late night drinking. heres to all the stupid stuff we used to do, light a match and watch myself burn in my alchohol enduced body. kiss my lips feel it brushing against mine, cant wait until were alone. i swear to god we make the best love. but im selfish, and all i want to please is myself, and yes im selfish but i ***** love the ***** out of you.

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Re: Last Time I Die (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:36:10 PM AEST
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Hmmm a little rough around the edges, but that just may be why I enjoyed this...Nice job.

Scorp.

Re: Last Time I Die (User Rating: 1 )
by ham323 on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 07:46:25 PM AEST
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Pretty good. Whose not selfish these days..

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