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You think you're just a mistake
You don't want to live another day
All you're doing is wasting away
In the life you have made
Thinking there's no reason to stay
When Hell is all you're put through
Living is completely useless to you

You're just a mistake still
Crying your eyes out
Because of what you feel
Thinking razors help
When they just hide
What you feel inside
Releasing through bleeding
To stop all feeling

You want to commit
The biggest mistake
There is to make
Because you couldn't take
All that you were given
All that you are feeling
It is a mistake to give in
And lose your chance to live
When it could've been
Better in the end [comments] => 5 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Living Mistake

Contributed by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 09:19:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Living Mistake

You think you're just a mistake
You don't want to live another day
All you're doing is wasting away
In the life you have made
Thinking there's no reason to stay
When Hell is all you're put through
Living is completely useless to you

You're just a mistake still
Crying your eyes out
Because of what you feel
Thinking razors help
When they just hide
What you feel inside
Releasing through bleeding
To stop all feeling

You want to commit
The biggest mistake
There is to make
Because you couldn't take
All that you were given
All that you are feeling
It is a mistake to give in
And lose your chance to live
When it could've been
Better in the end




Copyright © Essentially9 ... [ 2004-08-10 21:19:51]
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Re: Living Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 09:55:17 PM AEST
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This is a great write as there are so many on this site etc.
I've often searched my heart for a way to help these people.
We more like this.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Living Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 12:48:05 AM AEST
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Thats really really good. i really enjoyed it. thanks for posting it, its encouraging.


Re: Living Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 02:35:12 AM AEST
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Very good poem..with a good message..K


Re: Living Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:55:26 PM AEST
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Man I really connect with what you write...makes me see more clearer to what I'm feeling...and already know...about myself...and others...great job bro!

Summer


Re: Living Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:27:19 AM AEST
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This is so good..That last stanza is amazing Jennifer..Living mistake what a damn awesome way to word this..No matter what it is personal or not this is great.




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