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[aid] => mick
[title] => Panoramic View
[time] => 2004-08-10 21:03:54
[hometext] => thank you for all your feedback, it rocks. but i need more, i want to use your comments to become a better writer. thank you thank you thank you!
[bodytext] => She lives in Malibu Has cute clothes And a high IQ You say you know her well That your friendship is tried and true But what would you see Through a panoramic view? She has Prada and Jimmy Choo But she bought them secondhand Yah she lives in Malibu But on the other side And the words “I Love You” Are one she’s never heard her parents say What do you see through the panoramic view? Her super high IQ Was her ticket to a fancy school Unlike the money from your Daddy’s debut And for all those dances- Did she ever have an updo? Or has she ever flown to New York To write a dance review? What do you see through the panoramic view? Her dinner from the drive through Home alone But black and blue Take a look She’s not like you Take a look Through the panoramic view [comments] => 2 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 16 [informant] => stubbo87 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
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