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Array ( [sid] => 59557 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Only Way Out [time] => 2004-08-10 00:27:56 [hometext] => i was only depressed when i wrote this [bodytext] => I FEEL THAT MY ONLY WAY OUT IS DEATH
THOUGH I KNOW YOU WOULDN’T CARE IF I LEFT
SO I TAKE THE BLADE IN ONE HAND AND PULL ACROSS
TEARS FALL AS I WATCH THE BLOOD POUR
THOUGH THE BLOOD COMES FAST I’M NOT DONE
SO OVER AND OVER I CUT OVER MY OLD SCARS
NOW I’M CRYING HYSTERICALLY AND YOU STILL DON’T CARE
SO I CUT DEEPER INTO MY ARMS AND I FINALLY PASS OUT
AS I LAY BLEEDING I DREAM OF THE TIMES WE SHARED
A SMILE FAINTLY APPEARS AS I THINK OF YOUR FACE
BUT NOW IT FEELS LIKE YOU’RE DEAD AND I CAN’T BRING YOU BACK
THOUGH WHY SHOULD I CARE IF YOU WON’T EVEN SHED A TEAR
THERE’S NO POINT TO BELIEVE THAT YOU WANT ME FROM THE WAY YOU ACT
THE MEMORIES START TO FADE AWAY AND THERE I AM AGAIN
BLEEDING ON THE FLOOR WITH THESE TEARS OF HATE STILL FALLING
THOUGH I WOULDN’T NECESSARILY CALL THEM TEARS OF HATE
I WOULD RATHER CALL THEM TEARS OF DISBELIEF
ONLY BECAUSE I DON’T BELIEVE THAT WHAT YOU FELT LAST WEEK IS NOW GONE
I GUESS THAT’S JUST WHAT I GET FOR GETTING TOO ATTACHED
BUT WHAT AM I TO DO WHEN NO ONE ELSE IS THERE FOR ME TO HOLD
SO FAR NOT A DAMN PERSON THAT UNDERSTANDS MY PAIN
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Only Way Out

Contributed by lonely_boy on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 12:27:56 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I FEEL THAT MY ONLY WAY OUT IS DEATH
THOUGH I KNOW YOU WOULDN’T CARE IF I LEFT
SO I TAKE THE BLADE IN ONE HAND AND PULL ACROSS
TEARS FALL AS I WATCH THE BLOOD POUR
THOUGH THE BLOOD COMES FAST I’M NOT DONE
SO OVER AND OVER I CUT OVER MY OLD SCARS
NOW I’M CRYING HYSTERICALLY AND YOU STILL DON’T CARE
SO I CUT DEEPER INTO MY ARMS AND I FINALLY PASS OUT
AS I LAY BLEEDING I DREAM OF THE TIMES WE SHARED
A SMILE FAINTLY APPEARS AS I THINK OF YOUR FACE
BUT NOW IT FEELS LIKE YOU’RE DEAD AND I CAN’T BRING YOU BACK
THOUGH WHY SHOULD I CARE IF YOU WON’T EVEN SHED A TEAR
THERE’S NO POINT TO BELIEVE THAT YOU WANT ME FROM THE WAY YOU ACT
THE MEMORIES START TO FADE AWAY AND THERE I AM AGAIN
BLEEDING ON THE FLOOR WITH THESE TEARS OF HATE STILL FALLING
THOUGH I WOULDN’T NECESSARILY CALL THEM TEARS OF HATE
I WOULD RATHER CALL THEM TEARS OF DISBELIEF
ONLY BECAUSE I DON’T BELIEVE THAT WHAT YOU FELT LAST WEEK IS NOW GONE
I GUESS THAT’S JUST WHAT I GET FOR GETTING TOO ATTACHED
BUT WHAT AM I TO DO WHEN NO ONE ELSE IS THERE FOR ME TO HOLD
SO FAR NOT A DAMN PERSON THAT UNDERSTANDS MY PAIN

Copyright Â© lonely_boy ... [ 2004-08-10 00:27:56]
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Re: Only Way Out (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 04:04:33 AM AEST
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Yeah i really like this one, i see where you are coming from. I feel the same emotions as you do. I guess it is kind of different a guy broke my heart once and i have never fully recovered. I hope you keep hope, i have tried i know it may be hard at times. I have cut my wrists before but i have stopped that now, i guess i have kind of seen the light but sometimes i go back to old habits. Please keep strong and if you ever need to talk e-mail me. There are many people on this site that know how you feel and dont want you to hurt yourself. Keep faith.
Love always
Loretta
corrupted_minds

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