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Array ( [sid] => 59448 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the long bend of life-again [time] => 2004-08-09 07:07:38 [hometext] => why do we argue I hate It -again! [bodytext] => we had another argument tonite-again
over nothing like usual-again
I know he hates me deep inside
but pretends I'm okay for the kids eyes
I feel like it's time to leave-again
but I love my kids
and I do love him
we've been together for years
is it habit we're in
is it fate
is it what we both hate
still life happens
over and over -again
why can't life be like a romance novel
we say we are sorry-again
but why do we argue over nothing -again
and go through this pain -again
hope this time is not the end
but we can't keep going like this
like veering the long winding bend
let's start over again
this time no fights
ever again

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the long bend of life-again

Contributed by inoc on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 07:07:38 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

we had another argument tonite-again
over nothing like usual-again
I know he hates me deep inside
but pretends I'm okay for the kids eyes
I feel like it's time to leave-again
but I love my kids
and I do love him
we've been together for years
is it habit we're in
is it fate
is it what we both hate
still life happens
over and over -again
why can't life be like a romance novel
we say we are sorry-again
but why do we argue over nothing -again
and go through this pain -again
hope this time is not the end
but we can't keep going like this
like veering the long winding bend
let's start over again
this time no fights
ever again

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2004-08-09 07:07:38]
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Re: the long bend of life-again (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 08:07:10 AM AEST
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This is a hard situation for anyone. It's harder when there's kids involved. Sometimes fights stem from frustration and stress and you never know why your fighting! I hope things work out for the best for you. Beautiful write by the way.... take care!!!!

Kimberly :)

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