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Array ( [sid] => 59430 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No sunlight in the darkness [time] => 2004-08-09 01:04:26 [hometext] => I dont know but please read and comment. Thankz [bodytext] => There is no sunlight in the darkness,
I just broke down and now I’m a mess,
Why is life like death, and death like life,
Never worry it’s all solved with a knife,
Watch me bleed and see what you’ve done,
Know you’re the cause of what I’ve become,
I lust for pain I lust for death,
Tortured for eternity with each breath,
I cleft the blade into my wrist,
My eyes are filled with a murky mist,
I dig it deep I pull it down,
This all is done without a frown,
Veins are dripping precious blood,
I slit the other and now it’s a flood,
You caused me emotional abuse,
Kicked me out when I was no use,
Kissed me and said your love was real,
If it was then why didn’t I feel,
Now I need some devotion,
To change my emotion,
I hope you regret what your seem,
And hoped together we could have been,
A bloody mess is on the floor,
And now a core I have no more,
Pain in life I was to find,
This heart of mine was always blind,
Kind of always knew I’d end up this way,
I tried to stop it, I tried to pray,
But fate is sealed it cannot switch,
You wouldn’t care, I know I’m a *****,
So let it bleed and let it run,
I’m fading away and it’s still fun,
It’s blurry now I must be dead,
So lay me down right on my bed,
And finally I’m glad for a little while,
For I’d killed myself with a happy smile
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No sunlight in the darkness

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:04:26 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

There is no sunlight in the darkness,
I just broke down and now I’m a mess,
Why is life like death, and death like life,
Never worry it’s all solved with a knife,
Watch me bleed and see what you’ve done,
Know you’re the cause of what I’ve become,
I lust for pain I lust for death,
Tortured for eternity with each breath,
I cleft the blade into my wrist,
My eyes are filled with a murky mist,
I dig it deep I pull it down,
This all is done without a frown,
Veins are dripping precious blood,
I slit the other and now it’s a flood,
You caused me emotional abuse,
Kicked me out when I was no use,
Kissed me and said your love was real,
If it was then why didn’t I feel,
Now I need some devotion,
To change my emotion,
I hope you regret what your seem,
And hoped together we could have been,
A bloody mess is on the floor,
And now a core I have no more,
Pain in life I was to find,
This heart of mine was always blind,
Kind of always knew I’d end up this way,
I tried to stop it, I tried to pray,
But fate is sealed it cannot switch,
You wouldn’t care, I know I’m a *****,
So let it bleed and let it run,
I’m fading away and it’s still fun,
It’s blurry now I must be dead,
So lay me down right on my bed,
And finally I’m glad for a little while,
For I’d killed myself with a happy smile

Copyright Â© corrupted_minds ... [ 2004-08-09 01:04:26]
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Re: No sunlight in the darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:17:43 AM AEST
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this is very sad and I prya just a write but I use to think about suicide when I was alone but one nite a young teeage friend knocked on my door when I was so low.
I never knew his name other than Bubba as that's what we called him. He had jus came from a friend's house that had blown his own brains out in the bath tub. He had come to me for comfort but didn't realize I was thinking it over again. His words, " U know I couldn't do that to my friends and family, I couldn't put to this much pain, agony, and torture." Haven't seen Bubba since but I know he is a walking angel as he sught me to find afriend and probably might never see this but that he was an angel that nite.
Thanks Bubba.
luv, huggs, smiles, faith, hope, joy cometh in the morning,
emystar@msn.com

Re: No sunlight in the darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 01:35:53 AM AEST
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Chilling. A great write.

love always, dizza
xoxoxoxo

Re: No sunlight in the darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by lonelywolf04 on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:47:30 AM AEST
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really good i have been at that place...getting back to that place i like the "life like death and death like life" very true...dont realy do it...i would like to see more poems from you

Re: No sunlight in the darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Hakiokusaken on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 11:30:14 AM AEST
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I think you did very well. I am a fan of your work. great write, keep it up

Re: No sunlight in the darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 03:30:15 PM AEST
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amazing, brilliant, and exceptionally emotional write. some things change and some things never do.

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