Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 03-June 05:46:57 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 5943 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Sad End [time] => 2002-10-30 19:00:00 [hometext] => Well Anyway I'm back for those of you who can still remember me. High school doensn't exactly provide the most time for extra fun. Anyways...On to the poem. Oh and I forgot, I'm NOT mentally unstable for any first visitors who read this poem...;) [bodytext] => The time has come to make amends,
For lives of misery to finally end
These words of death I now do send
Eternally to my dear friends,
Death is knocking on my door
To end a life forevermore
To rest a soul so tired and sore
With a shadow-infected eerie core
Darkness flows withing these veins
Where morbid thought successfully reign
And hope of futures slowly wane
For thought of happiness go insane
The links of this brain are rusting and breaking
The foundations are going and shaking
Eternally unstable, a Hell it's making
To end that, this life Death is taking
A future, these hands are no longer seeking
The essence of life, this body is slowly leaking
On the edge of a grave, these feets are riskily creaking
Insanity, it's effectiveness is now just peaking...
Death is knocking on my door...
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 529 [topic] => 39 [informant] => huey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
A Sad End

Contributed by huey on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



The time has come to make amends,
For lives of misery to finally end
These words of death I now do send
Eternally to my dear friends,
Death is knocking on my door
To end a life forevermore
To rest a soul so tired and sore
With a shadow-infected eerie core
Darkness flows withing these veins
Where morbid thought successfully reign
And hope of futures slowly wane
For thought of happiness go insane
The links of this brain are rusting and breaking
The foundations are going and shaking
Eternally unstable, a Hell it's making
To end that, this life Death is taking
A future, these hands are no longer seeking
The essence of life, this body is slowly leaking
On the edge of a grave, these feets are riskily creaking
Insanity, it's effectiveness is now just peaking...
Death is knocking on my door...




Copyright © huey ... [ 2002-10-30 19:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: A Sad End (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 10:20:28 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I'm glad you added that
your NOT mentally instable
i think alot of your friends
would be worrying about you
right about now
Great write, Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: A Sad End (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 12:05:53 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I really enjoyed this one a lot & welcome back!! Christina


Re: A Sad End (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 01:01:07 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Good write...full of emotions...glad to see you here again..
Jenni


Re: A Sad End (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Blu-XTC on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 11:43:15 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
1 of da best poems I eva read.Amazin job.


Re: A Sad End (User Rating: 1 )
by Shabby on Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 05:42:25 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
i could relate very well....nice writing...very vivid




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com