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[aid] => mick
[title] => My Poems
[time] => 2004-08-07 16:49:07
[hometext] => Tho I have been writing of late, I have not been posting, and most of my stuff I probably wont for personal reasons, this one, well, I guess it cant do any more harm than my honesty already has !
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These poems they don’t flow no more
They are hidden within these tears
For even within these few months
Losing you… was my greatest fear
I showed my heart, so open, so true
But just what did this achieve
All it seems is freaking you out
Honesty… just doesn’t succeed
Now for you within my presence
You’re uncomfortable is what you say
So for now out of love and respect
My distance… I’ll keep right away
My heart it is hurting deep right now
But I hope that some day real soon
Our friendship can start over again
And my tears… can leave this room
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[ratings] => 7
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My Poems
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:49:07 PM in AEST
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These poems they don’t flow no more
They are hidden within these tears
For even within these few months
Losing you… was my greatest fear
I showed my heart, so open, so true
But just what did this achieve
All it seems is freaking you out
Honesty… just doesn’t succeed
Now for you within my presence
You’re uncomfortable is what you say
So for now out of love and respect
My distance… I’ll keep right away
My heart it is hurting deep right now
But I hope that some day real soon
Our friendship can start over again
And my tears… can leave this room
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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2004-08-07 16:49:07]
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Re: My Poems
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:53:49 PM AEST
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((((((mick))))))
Awwww ..This is so lovely, but so sad.. I really miss reading your happy poems and I wish that this was another one of them....
One thing, tho...don't ever compromise your honesty......
Hugs
Jen |
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by SuperAsh16 on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:55:24 PM AEST
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| how sad. im not gonna lie. i cant relate to that cuz ive never been in love or anything like that. but this really touched me. congrats. and really well done. |
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Re: My Poems
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 06:11:28 PM AEST
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i enjoy all of your poetry...but prefer the happy writes...know you have to always stay true to yourself and stand strong
Shari |
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Re: My Poems
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 06:34:31 PM AEST
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I am sorry for your anguish. Hopefully life will come back around and improve. We were never promised life or love would be fair, so we just have to go along for the ride.
Rita |
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Re: My Poems
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 09:04:14 PM AEST
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Oh Mick this is so sad but nomatter what never lose your honesty though people cant handle it its the best way to be a weird world we live in now where the majority rather would be lied to or lie isnt it. Not for me and its not for you. A great write
Michelle |
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Re: My Poems
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 09:15:56 PM AEST
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| awww... this is so sad but beautifully written... honesty is a good thing if nothing else, always be honest with yourself. :) |
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Re: My Poems
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by thumper on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 11:58:54 PM AEST
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If it's meant to be, it will happen. I hope for your sake, it does. I liked this but I'm sorry it ended the way it has. Keep faith, Mick. Peace to you and your family.
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: My Poems
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by Rylo on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 12:32:01 AM AEST
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| This was very touching, filled with so much sadness, yet so much love. Well I wish you the best of luck Mick. Thanks for sharing this piece, it was great. |
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Re: My Poems
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by venkat on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 04:02:04 AM AEST
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| very touching..filled with sadness..a heart felt write. but keep faith dear friend ..venkat |
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Re: My Poems
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by pixie on
Sunday, 8th August 2004 @ 11:53:18 AM AEST
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This is such a sad and emotional write Mick, I am sorry for your pain *hugs*
Hope to read some happier poetry from you soon,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: My Poems
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:30:17 AM AEST
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| Writing from the heart is one of the best ways to help you through, and though this poem is filled with pain, I hope, Mick, it gives you even the slightest amount of relief to post it ... it has certainly been one of the best ways for me to deal with the hurt that seems to come with loving someone. I truly hope that one day all your dreams come true ... you certainly deserve it. ... hugs Jan |
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Re: My Poems
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 02:59:43 AM AEST
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Hope it works out, Mick.
Keep up the great work here . . . |
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Re: My Poems
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:14:24 AM AEST
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Wow Mick guess I have some catching up to do here.
Hang tuff, my friend, If this person can't see the beuaty into your beautifull soul then the loss is there's. I'm sorry u r are hurtting but hang tuff, my friend as everything i see in u has un matchable beauty.
Being a single father always makes u a great person inside as I raised my children without the help of their father in any way. To see u dedicated to your children and this site then someone is very foolish to let u slip away.
luv, huggs, smiles, faith, hope, joy cometh in the morning,
emy |
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Re: My Poems
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 05:56:19 PM AEST
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| Awww, Mick, this is such a sad piece. Hats off to ya my friend. Nicely written. *S* Cynthia |
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