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Array ( [sid] => 59220 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suffocate [time] => 2004-08-07 03:13:05 [hometext] => for alicia, who needed to breathe but suffocated. i'm sorry we never were together, i think of you everyday and wish i had done something to keep you here you were my air now i would gladly give you mine. so you could breathe again ill love you forever [bodytext] => Life seems like a war that I'll never overcome
Arrows splinter my heart swords seperate my soul
Nothing to do but sever the strings of life that were bound to break
The desintigrating letters left unsent
Words spoken as unfilled as an empty glass
Restrained from the stock of veneration
I was deserted with abhorrence instead
Rejecting icons of esteem.

I'm playing with fire but i'll never be burnt
But I am Parched from existence,
So nothing foresee's the things I have earned
Forever endulging into the silence that nobody heard
Drained from bliss I composed my own
Rapture to me was to detest

The only reason I live in this life
To suit the souls of others
To please only merely satisfying myself
I am a slave humanity
Yet I loathe the social disfavor
Conflict would only bring me closer to nauseate
my life from the world

I lust for the suffering
and crave for anxiety
Just vexate me from the world
If I am an obsticle to your ***** prosperity

So why do i thirst to live?.... If i just live to suffocate? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 25 [informant] => blueeyedevil13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Suffocate

Contributed by blueeyedevil13 on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:13:05 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Life seems like a war that I'll never overcome
Arrows splinter my heart swords seperate my soul
Nothing to do but sever the strings of life that were bound to break
The desintigrating letters left unsent
Words spoken as unfilled as an empty glass
Restrained from the stock of veneration
I was deserted with abhorrence instead
Rejecting icons of esteem.

I'm playing with fire but i'll never be burnt
But I am Parched from existence,
So nothing foresee's the things I have earned
Forever endulging into the silence that nobody heard
Drained from bliss I composed my own
Rapture to me was to detest

The only reason I live in this life
To suit the souls of others
To please only merely satisfying myself
I am a slave humanity
Yet I loathe the social disfavor
Conflict would only bring me closer to nauseate
my life from the world

I lust for the suffering
and crave for anxiety
Just vexate me from the world
If I am an obsticle to your ***** prosperity

So why do i thirst to live?.... If i just live to suffocate?




Copyright © blueeyedevil13 ... [ 2004-08-07 03:13:05]
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Re: Suffocate (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 01:28:37 PM AEST
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aww *hugs* strong feelings here... powerful write.


Re: Suffocate (User Rating: 1 )
by Oriana on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 03:28:29 PM AEST
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Deep.....Keep it up :)
Oriana




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