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Array ( [sid] => 58961 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fade away - corrupted minds [time] => 2004-08-05 05:43:55 [hometext] => This is structured weirdly, and i dont really have much of an opinion on it. I would like to hear what you guys think of it. Comments please [bodytext] => Lost in a moment, lost in chance,
I’ve been here and there in just a glance,
Now rain pours down on my lonely mind,
My distant heart is hard to find,
It’s all done now, I’ve come to the end,
Don’t need to cry for me my friend,
I’m old and gray, about to expire,
And about to attempt my one desire,

So
Just hold me close,
And kiss my lips,
And hope I don’t fade away,

I’ve played the game, and I’ve been thrown to the floor,
Been abused, used, and called a whore,
Enough’s enough it’s been too long already,
I’m tired of being a repairable teddy,
Raped and assaulted every night,
Don’t think I gave up without a fight,
Take a step back, don’t come too near,
Don’t try to help me make it clear,

So
Hold me up close,
And kiss my lips,
And hope I don’t fade away,

It’s all ***** up, I don’t give a crap,
In life your born right into a trap,
Curled in a cold dark corner all night,
And with the mirror I can’t stand the sight,
Bloody body, heart and wrist,
Shaded mind, all gone to mist,
Slowly lights would call me home,
And once again I was alone,
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 36 [informant] => corrupted_minds [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Fade away - corrupted minds

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 05:43:55 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Lost in a moment, lost in chance,
I’ve been here and there in just a glance,
Now rain pours down on my lonely mind,
My distant heart is hard to find,
It’s all done now, I’ve come to the end,
Don’t need to cry for me my friend,
I’m old and gray, about to expire,
And about to attempt my one desire,

So
Just hold me close,
And kiss my lips,
And hope I don’t fade away,

I’ve played the game, and I’ve been thrown to the floor,
Been abused, used, and called a whore,
Enough’s enough it’s been too long already,
I’m tired of being a repairable teddy,
Raped and assaulted every night,
Don’t think I gave up without a fight,
Take a step back, don’t come too near,
Don’t try to help me make it clear,

So
Hold me up close,
And kiss my lips,
And hope I don’t fade away,

It’s all ***** up, I don’t give a crap,
In life your born right into a trap,
Curled in a cold dark corner all night,
And with the mirror I can’t stand the sight,
Bloody body, heart and wrist,
Shaded mind, all gone to mist,
Slowly lights would call me home,
And once again I was alone,




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Re: Fade away - corrupted minds (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:14:12 AM AEST
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very dark and sad poem, a great write....

takecare
pixie xx


Re: Fade away - corrupted minds (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:23:50 AM AEST
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Sad but written well.
luvv, huggs,
emy


Re: Fade away - corrupted minds (User Rating: 1 )
by Row on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 06:43:44 AM AEST
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sad but still nice loz


Re: Fade away - corrupted minds (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 07:42:38 AM AEST
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Good write...but the words are so sad and deep.To know one can be hurt like that, and one has......its painful!


Re: Fade away - corrupted minds (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 12:48:14 AM AEST
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Breath taking and captivating..powerful..and sadly touches the heart. venkat..


Re: Fade away - corrupted minds (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 02:54:33 AM AEST
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sad but really good. Really got the emotion across.

dizza
xoxoxox


Re: Fade away - corrupted minds (User Rating: 1 )
by Hakiokusaken on Friday, 6th August 2004 @ 04:50:47 AM AEST
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The expiramental structure came out well and although the poem is troubling it is very good and i would like to read more of your work. Im glad i read it.





Re: Fade away - corrupted minds (User Rating: 1 )
by cj_ranson on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 04:55:32 AM AEST
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reeel good that one, made me feel it inside




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