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Array ( [sid] => 58788 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hell You Call Life [time] => 2004-08-04 00:02:52 [hometext] => Please Comment....they mean alot...Thanx!!!! [bodytext] => I cut away at my skin
I watch the blood fall
It doesn’t feel the same though
I think I’ll just end it all

I fell so many times
Along my written path
It seems as though I’m always on my knees
Begging for god to just show his wrath

Take my life away from me
I know I don’t deserve it
I’ve beaten myself down to the bone
Night after night, slit after slit

I’ve given up on myself
Why can’t god just do the same
My life isn’t worth anything
To everyone I’m just a shame

Everyone looks down at me
They can’t believe the things I do
I tell them I am sorry
I tell them I wish it wasn’t true

God please just spare me
From this hell you call life
I can’t take this ***** anymore
Maybe I’ll just slip with a knife

If you won’t end it, I will
It’s not worth the pain
I’m sorry for my mistakes
I have gone completely insane
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 36 [informant] => CrimsonTears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Hell You Call Life

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 12:02:52 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I cut away at my skin
I watch the blood fall
It doesn’t feel the same though
I think I’ll just end it all

I fell so many times
Along my written path
It seems as though I’m always on my knees
Begging for god to just show his wrath

Take my life away from me
I know I don’t deserve it
I’ve beaten myself down to the bone
Night after night, slit after slit

I’ve given up on myself
Why can’t god just do the same
My life isn’t worth anything
To everyone I’m just a shame

Everyone looks down at me
They can’t believe the things I do
I tell them I am sorry
I tell them I wish it wasn’t true

God please just spare me
From this hell you call life
I can’t take this ***** anymore
Maybe I’ll just slip with a knife

If you won’t end it, I will
It’s not worth the pain
I’m sorry for my mistakes
I have gone completely insane




Copyright © CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-08-04 00:02:52]
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Re: Hell You Call Life (User Rating: 1 )
by MissMandy on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 01:21:22 AM AEST
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I hope instead of killing you, God brings you healing. I'm sorry you feel this way, and I hope things look up for you soon!

~Mandy~


Re: Hell You Call Life (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 06:04:16 AM AEST
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very pained write, I am sorry you feel this way,

good expression,

pixie xx


Re: Hell You Call Life (User Rating: 1 )
by RavenMarieKrashauna on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 08:58:23 AM AEST
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Don't think your the only one, that no one understands, or that those who say they care are only pitying you. There are many of us who feel such pain in this life that it creates this need to bring physical pain to ourselves and to pray each night for death. Perhaps someday we'll all find that light in the dark that will brings us peace within ourselves.




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