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Array ( [sid] => 58493 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => like cold summer rain [time] => 2004-08-02 06:24:22 [hometext] => this is a poem i wrote about the woman i love..... its pretty old... strange kind of style.... but it is still a part of me.... read with care [bodytext] => a slight northern wind
will carry you to me
and your eyes are the pearls
of melloncholy

so the signs do tell
that we bleed the same blood
we feel the same flood
that we dread the same hell

because you are my third eye
my velvet night sky
and i can feel your pain
like the cold summer rain
and i can feel your pain
like the cold summer rain

you have become a part of me
the only part that i like
you bring out the honesty
ive yearned for, for so long

so dont rap our heart
in the roses you find
because i cant promise
the thorns wont sink in with time

because your are my bridge
you are my ledge
and i can feel your pain,
like cold summer rain
i can feel your pain,
like cold summer rain
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like cold summer rain

Contributed by feathercut on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 06:24:22 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

a slight northern wind
will carry you to me
and your eyes are the pearls
of melloncholy

so the signs do tell
that we bleed the same blood
we feel the same flood
that we dread the same hell

because you are my third eye
my velvet night sky
and i can feel your pain
like the cold summer rain
and i can feel your pain
like the cold summer rain

you have become a part of me
the only part that i like
you bring out the honesty
ive yearned for, for so long

so dont rap our heart
in the roses you find
because i cant promise
the thorns wont sink in with time

because your are my bridge
you are my ledge
and i can feel your pain,
like cold summer rain
i can feel your pain,
like cold summer rain

Copyright © feathercut ... [ 2004-08-02 06:24:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: like cold summer rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:11:45 PM AEST
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I really loved this whole poem, it was very unique. My favorite part was:
so dont rap our heart
in the roses you find
because i cant promise
the thorns wont sink in with time

It's a wonderful poem.
Katie

Re: like cold summer rain (User Rating: 1 )
by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 01:04:00 PM AEST
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i thought that maybe you could make it sound better its alredy excelent but maybe u coul dchange feel the same flood to drowing in our own blood or flood of tears sorry i,m very anoying lol but just trying to help xgripx

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