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what to say to me
on those days when i'm distant
or where to touch me when i'm feeling ugly.
and sometimes i think i could leave you
with no regret
and maybe even laugh about it
with my friends.
sometimes i cry all day because
i hate you
but expect you to hold me
to make me feel better.
sometimes i think you know
how i feel about you
other times i'm sure you have
no clue.
sometimes i feel compassion for you
even though you never have for me.
sometimes i visit a lover i knew
when we were apart
i wonder if you do the same when we're
not understanding each other.
sometimes its not easy to look at you
except those times when i feel i'm no
better than you.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 48 [informant] => priss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

sometimes

Contributed by priss on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 10:18:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

sometimes i feel you should know
what to say to me
on those days when i'm distant
or where to touch me when i'm feeling ugly.
and sometimes i think i could leave you
with no regret
and maybe even laugh about it
with my friends.
sometimes i cry all day because
i hate you
but expect you to hold me
to make me feel better.
sometimes i think you know
how i feel about you
other times i'm sure you have
no clue.
sometimes i feel compassion for you
even though you never have for me.
sometimes i visit a lover i knew
when we were apart
i wonder if you do the same when we're
not understanding each other.
sometimes its not easy to look at you
except those times when i feel i'm no
better than you.

Copyright © priss ... [ 2004-07-31 22:18:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 10:35:41 PM AEST
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good but sad write... I have felt this way before........

Re: sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 04:58:24 PM AEST
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IT COULD NOT BE WRITTEN BETTER - YOU HIT THE NAIL ON THE HEAD- GREAT WRITE - SOOOOO SAD---- SOOOO TRUE

Re: sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 06:28:39 AM AEST
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This is pretty deep, both in the descriptions of the complexities and ambiguities in relationships, but also the frailties and needs and contradictions in anyone who feels and thinks beyond a fundamental level. This is really honest and forthright. I've often felt this way in relationships too, but you said it better here than I ever have.

Spike

Re: sometimes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 4th April 2007 @ 06:47:37 AM AEST
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Oh my .. priss, this was compelling. I realize it was over two years ago, but wow!
This is so full of brave and honest admissions. And many that, if more people
searched their souls, would find. I am in total agreement with spike. A perfect
depiction of the complex emotions that surround us when relating intimately with
another soul.

Excellent write, priss. And very well done!

~Breezy

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