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Array ( [sid] => 57983 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Official Date [time] => 2004-07-28 22:20:10 [hometext] => This is an older poem i wrote to my baby, Sandra, I wrote this to her on our second anniversary, let me know what you guys think. ;) [bodytext] => To my beautiful baby girl,

Sometimes I wonder,
Will she be the one?
The mother of my children,
The bearer of my son.

Is this the woman,
Who is destined to me?
I love it so far!
So I’ll accept it with glee.

I know I want you
Forever, for
That’s how long we’re
Together, in my
Happiest thoughts, my
Most ecstatic dreams
I hold you in my arms and
Pull you closer to me.

I love you,
Do you love me?
Je t’aime, et vous?
Vous aimez moi?

I know you do,
Which gives me butterflies still,
And I know that you’ll love me
‘til the very end.

I love you baby,
With all of my heart,
And even though our relationship
Has only just begun to start

I know that
Four, five,
Six years ahead,
We will be planning
Our day to be Wed.

And I know you, too
Cannot wait,
For us to have, an
Official Date.

Happy Anniversary Baby,
I love you with all of my heart.
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Official Date

Contributed by Amitron on Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 10:20:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

To my beautiful baby girl,

Sometimes I wonder,
Will she be the one?
The mother of my children,
The bearer of my son.

Is this the woman,
Who is destined to me?
I love it so far!
So I’ll accept it with glee.

I know I want you
Forever, for
That’s how long we’re
Together, in my
Happiest thoughts, my
Most ecstatic dreams
I hold you in my arms and
Pull you closer to me.

I love you,
Do you love me?
Je t’aime, et vous?
Vous aimez moi?

I know you do,
Which gives me butterflies still,
And I know that you’ll love me
‘til the very end.

I love you baby,
With all of my heart,
And even though our relationship
Has only just begun to start

I know that
Four, five,
Six years ahead,
We will be planning
Our day to be Wed.

And I know you, too
Cannot wait,
For us to have, an
Official Date.

Happy Anniversary Baby,
I love you with all of my heart.

Copyright Â© Amitron ... [ 2004-07-28 22:20:10]
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Re: Official Date (User Rating: 1 )
by Seans_Girl on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:04:59 AM AEST
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Very sweet and heartfelt. Good luck! I write poems like that all the time to my boyfriend. I guess i wished a little too much because I'm only 18 and pregnant with twins and engaged to be married. I am happy though because I know he is the one. It just went a little too fast for me but hey, that's life.
*Natalie*

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