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Array ( [sid] => 57701 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => -Too Late- [time] => 2004-07-26 21:01:40 [hometext] => hahaha...i don't like any of my poems...dr suess don't got nothing on me! hahaha...-_-;;; [bodytext] => clenching my fists
and making a list
of the things i hate;
the things i'll miss

i'd think about flying through the sky
instead of going under
time's going by...

i'm thinking about the one's i love...
a graceful dove
wrapping me in it's wings
and soaring above

soaring above
to my sanctuary in the sky
i would've come sooner
if i wasn't afraid to fly...

but what if i fell?
to burn in hell...
and when i'd yell
would u recognize my voice?
would u be able to tell?

and all my questions...
answers will never come
and these thoughts i have are immature to some...

i hate everything...
a person; a lie
why should i be the one to cry?
get her feelings hurt;
why should i want to die?

so remember me as u sit in a chair
and read this poem...
i'm out of your hair
i really did love u
not that u'd care...

i clenched my fists
i made a list
of the things i hated
the things i miss

too bad it's too late...
nothing could stop me
i guess it was fate [comments] => 2 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 36 [informant] => CRIMSONxXxFLOW [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
-Too Late-

Contributed by CRIMSONxXxFLOW on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 09:01:40 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



clenching my fists
and making a list
of the things i hate;
the things i'll miss

i'd think about flying through the sky
instead of going under
time's going by...

i'm thinking about the one's i love...
a graceful dove
wrapping me in it's wings
and soaring above

soaring above
to my sanctuary in the sky
i would've come sooner
if i wasn't afraid to fly...

but what if i fell?
to burn in hell...
and when i'd yell
would u recognize my voice?
would u be able to tell?

and all my questions...
answers will never come
and these thoughts i have are immature to some...

i hate everything...
a person; a lie
why should i be the one to cry?
get her feelings hurt;
why should i want to die?

so remember me as u sit in a chair
and read this poem...
i'm out of your hair
i really did love u
not that u'd care...

i clenched my fists
i made a list
of the things i hated
the things i miss

too bad it's too late...
nothing could stop me
i guess it was fate




Copyright © CRIMSONxXxFLOW ... [ 2004-07-26 21:01:40]
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Re: -Too Late- (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:14:35 PM AEST
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hey i really like your poem, its really deep and its really cool !


Re: -Too Late- (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 08:08:41 PM AEST
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Well I like it.




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