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Array ( [sid] => 57583 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Give Me Some Strength. [time] => 2004-07-26 01:53:02 [hometext] => Every thing I ask for in this I am asking god for. Apart from the last verse. In that I am asking my parents not to be mad at me because of the way i'm turning out and it's saying I don't need them to show me the way... [bodytext] => Give me sone strength,
To put a smile on my face.
I don't want to except,
That i'm a silking waste.

Give me some life,
To keep me flowing strong.
Lately, i've been so tired.
That i sleep all day long.

Give me a bit of happiness,
Don't turn and neglect me.
Give me some credit,
I'm only becomming what every one makes me.

Give me a reason,
Other than, others care.
Because things are right now,
NO ONE! Is here.

Don't get stressed with me.
And don't be mad.
I'm the only one that can under stand me!
And that's why i don't need your hand! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 65 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Give Me Some Strength.

Contributed by deathdrop on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 01:53:02 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Give me sone strength,
To put a smile on my face.
I don't want to except,
That i'm a silking waste.

Give me some life,
To keep me flowing strong.
Lately, i've been so tired.
That i sleep all day long.

Give me a bit of happiness,
Don't turn and neglect me.
Give me some credit,
I'm only becomming what every one makes me.

Give me a reason,
Other than, others care.
Because things are right now,
NO ONE! Is here.

Don't get stressed with me.
And don't be mad.
I'm the only one that can under stand me!
And that's why i don't need your hand!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-07-26 01:53:02]
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Re: Give Me Some Strength. (User Rating: 1 )
by LiquidChaos on Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 06:14:44 AM AEST
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You're not a waste. Do you hear me Rosie?

YOU ARE NOT A WASTE.

Did you hear me that time?

I'd fly to you if I could. You know I'm here for you emotionally if you need me! I can't be there physicaly, but I wish I could. Hang in there...I know God's got a plan for your life. Don't give up!!

-Addie

Re: Give Me Some Strength. (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Sunday, 9th July 2006 @ 08:47:54 AM AEST
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the first section you mentioned i feel and i actually thought of myslef a waste. no one is a waste and eventually in time your family will take you and belive in you as who you are. just remember that family is always there even though they do not like your choices in life. you will get by. keep writing it helps. thank you for sharing and be strong.

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