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Array ( [sid] => 57018 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hey Bobby, [time] => 2004-07-21 08:09:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Hey Bobby, you’re overdressed.
Suit, tie, jacket,
and a carnation;
I almost didn’t recognize you
without your leather.

Do you feel out of place?

I see you’re packed
and ready to go;
leather jacket, ratty
cut-off, and your cap,
all folded neatly
on the side.
Beer, Jack Daniel’s,
and cigarettes
right next to you.

Pictures of your wife,
your kids, and your bike,
all the things
you liked, loved,
and lived for crammed
inside a box.

Are you going to miss them?

Hey, Bobby,
it’s a going away party.
The guys are giving
you a toast, wishing
you a safe ride. . .
while, the girl sit crying
with your family.
They miss you already;
but you remain silent.
I thought you liked parties.

How does it feel to be
the guest of honor?

Well I’ve got to say good-bye now,
I wish you could stay longer.
It won’t be the same without you;
but you chose to live hard
and die fast.
I’ll miss you Bobby B.

Do you think there are bikes
wherever you’re going?

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 43 [informant] => pvd [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 51 [ratings] => 11 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Hey Bobby,

Contributed by pvd on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 08:09:49 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Hey Bobby, you’re overdressed.
Suit, tie, jacket,
and a carnation;
I almost didn’t recognize you
without your leather.

Do you feel out of place?

I see you’re packed
and ready to go;
leather jacket, ratty
cut-off, and your cap,
all folded neatly
on the side.
Beer, Jack Daniel’s,
and cigarettes
right next to you.

Pictures of your wife,
your kids, and your bike,
all the things
you liked, loved,
and lived for crammed
inside a box.

Are you going to miss them?

Hey, Bobby,
it’s a going away party.
The guys are giving
you a toast, wishing
you a safe ride. . .
while, the girl sit crying
with your family.
They miss you already;
but you remain silent.
I thought you liked parties.

How does it feel to be
the guest of honor?

Well I’ve got to say good-bye now,
I wish you could stay longer.
It won’t be the same without you;
but you chose to live hard
and die fast.
I’ll miss you Bobby B.

Do you think there are bikes
wherever you’re going?

Copyright Â© pvd ... [ 2004-07-21 08:09:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hey Bobby, (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 12:38:21 PM AEST
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This is a great write, cryptic, but to the point. He knows you'll miss him, and this is a very nice way to show the love you had for him.

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