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Flooding her heart.
Swamped by the images
Of her childhood,
Of her past.

Knowing she can’t escape,
The flashbacks.
Attacking her tears,
Till they break down,
And fall.

Raindrops from her eyes,
Crashing at her feet.
Leaving her blinded,
By the poison,
By the hurt.

Hiding beneath her scars,
Burying herself.
Inside her head,
Hoping to become numb,
To be free.

Cowering from the truth,
Curling up,
Escaping her thoughts.
Hoping for an end,
To this life.

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Pain flowing through her head

Contributed by diamond_tears on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:35:11 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Pain flowing through her head
Flooding her heart.
Swamped by the images
Of her childhood,
Of her past.

Knowing she can’t escape,
The flashbacks.
Attacking her tears,
Till they break down,
And fall.

Raindrops from her eyes,
Crashing at her feet.
Leaving her blinded,
By the poison,
By the hurt.

Hiding beneath her scars,
Burying herself.
Inside her head,
Hoping to become numb,
To be free.

Cowering from the truth,
Curling up,
Escaping her thoughts.
Hoping for an end,
To this life.

Copyright Â© diamond_tears ... [ 2004-07-19 17:35:11]
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Re: Pain flowing through her head (User Rating: 1 )
by 8kiwi8 on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 06:06:37 PM AEST
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look im the first commenter :-)

i loved these lines:
Attacking her tears

Raindrops from her eyes

Hiding beneath her scars

Cowering from the truth,

the whole things really cool, i dont know exactly what to say but i know what i'm thinking lol! its a really really good poem but please don't do what the last line says i love youuuu :'( ....well done! luvya x x x x kiwi

Re: Pain flowing through her head (User Rating: 1 )
by PurpleMoonJuice on Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 03:09:06 PM AEST
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Hey joooooooooo
great poem, liked the 4th stanza best :P
love yooooooooooou
Vicki xx

Re: Pain flowing through her head (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 11:26:07 AM AEST
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Very good bro!....we all seem to try to hide from the pain in our head but it will never go away...

please comment on my work too
summer

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