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Array ( [sid] => 56678 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cried So Hard [time] => 2004-07-18 20:02:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Cried all night
Until my last breath
Let it all seep out
Every possible tear left
Just like you did
I wanted you to let me cry
But we faught about it
Faught until the end
I cried myself to "sleep"
I made it possible
Reaching suffocation by crying
I'm on the floor in a puddle
But not blood
My tears
The floor is drenched
I cried myself to "sleep"
It started out just a weep
Then progressed to a cry of death
Who knew crying could kill?
It does now....
It killed me emotionally
And now physically.....
I died by suffocation
Lack of air....
It's hard to breathe while crying

Crying suffocated me
I cried for my suicide
What about yours [comments] => 3 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 36 [informant] => imlostbutloved69 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Cried So Hard

Contributed by imlostbutloved69 on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 08:02:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Cried all night
Until my last breath
Let it all seep out
Every possible tear left
Just like you did
I wanted you to let me cry
But we faught about it
Faught until the end
I cried myself to "sleep"
I made it possible
Reaching suffocation by crying
I'm on the floor in a puddle
But not blood
My tears
The floor is drenched
I cried myself to "sleep"
It started out just a weep
Then progressed to a cry of death
Who knew crying could kill?
It does now....
It killed me emotionally
And now physically.....
I died by suffocation
Lack of air....
It's hard to breathe while crying

Crying suffocated me
I cried for my suicide
What about yours

Copyright © imlostbutloved69 ... [ 2004-07-18 20:02:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Cried So Hard (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 08:46:09 PM AEST
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Ouch this is too painful, what about just forgiving one another it is hard to but atleast you will still be there for each other?

Re: Cried So Hard (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 06:14:24 AM AEST
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this is such a powerful write.....

pixie xx

Re: Cried So Hard (User Rating: 1 )
by iluvpencils on Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 05:48:50 PM AEST
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Wow. This is very moving. I'm so sorry for what you had to go through but this is an amazing piece of work. Thank you.
-Claire

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