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Array ( [sid] => 5642 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => A Heavenly Demon [time] => 2002-10-26 09:30:00 [hometext] => Sometimes the one person you want with you the most, is the one person that you need to leave behind. [bodytext] => Powerless against the waves of emotion
Tired of weathering this storm
Answers are bluntly incoherent
Pushing me one inch closer to the edge

Every time I think it’s over
The paradox of you enters me
I for once want some freedom
My mind can deal with this no longer

A disease, you’ve left me crippled
Amputations continue to molest me’
You’ve done but one thing wrong
Your existence is your only sin

Energies from your mind are omnipresent
Your speak not a word
How can you have all this power
A strength you never even wanted

One of us must leave
I, like a faithful shepherd, volunteer
Just point me in any of the 360 degrees
I will never disturb you again [comments] => 4 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Canislupus86 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

A Heavenly Demon

Contributed by Canislupus86 on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Powerless against the waves of emotion
Tired of weathering this storm
Answers are bluntly incoherent
Pushing me one inch closer to the edge

Every time I think it’s over
The paradox of you enters me
I for once want some freedom
My mind can deal with this no longer

A disease, you’ve left me crippled
Amputations continue to molest me’
You’ve done but one thing wrong
Your existence is your only sin

Energies from your mind are omnipresent
Your speak not a word
How can you have all this power
A strength you never even wanted

One of us must leave
I, like a faithful shepherd, volunteer
Just point me in any of the 360 degrees
I will never disturb you again

Copyright Â© Canislupus86 ... [ 2002-10-26 09:30:00]
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Re: A Heavenly Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 09:33:41 AM AEST
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awwww....this is sad

Re: A Heavenly Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by baby_bee on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 09:57:11 AM AEST
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Wow...I completely relate to this write. Exactly what I'm going through right now. Do I fall back into his arms because it feels right or do I walk away knowing it's the right thing to do. Way to go....good emotional writing.

Bel

Re: A Heavenly Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Angel on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 01:19:32 PM AEST
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dang! it reminds me of e and my ex. i like the poem though

Re: A Heavenly Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 01:42:00 PM AEST
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Love these words - can relate to them so well. Wonderful poem.

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