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Array ( [sid] => 56387 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Is a mother's love enough? [time] => 2004-07-16 12:02:52 [hometext] => We sometimes feel unwanted and turn the wrong way and when the words of love is finally spoken sometimes you cant turn back [bodytext] => I'm only 18 years old
Yet my heart has turned ice cold
I've done what most will do in a life time
I'm hiding from pigs who want me for a crime
I've fowled up enough to make most hate me
But I have no regrets and I won't plea
It's my life no matter where I run
I'll continue to live until I'm done
Mom told me I was like the people she wanted to hunt down
I know she still loves me but her words made me frown
I feel like a cracked nut shell
I told her secrets most would condem me to hell
But she held me tight and said I will always be her baby
She asked if this path I was on was over all I could say was maybe
She can't sleep at night
She knows of my daily fight
She's scarred for the choices I make
But she knows I won't break
She crys for fear my end is near
I tell her its alright while escaping her eyes is a tear
she's starting to look old and tired
It'll be my fault if she gets fired
Just the thought makes my stomach sink
So I stay stoned so I don't have to think [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Daydreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Is a mother's love enough?

Contributed by Daydreamer on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:02:52 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I'm only 18 years old
Yet my heart has turned ice cold
I've done what most will do in a life time
I'm hiding from pigs who want me for a crime
I've fowled up enough to make most hate me
But I have no regrets and I won't plea
It's my life no matter where I run
I'll continue to live until I'm done
Mom told me I was like the people she wanted to hunt down
I know she still loves me but her words made me frown
I feel like a cracked nut shell
I told her secrets most would condem me to hell
But she held me tight and said I will always be her baby
She asked if this path I was on was over all I could say was maybe
She can't sleep at night
She knows of my daily fight
She's scarred for the choices I make
But she knows I won't break
She crys for fear my end is near
I tell her its alright while escaping her eyes is a tear
she's starting to look old and tired
It'll be my fault if she gets fired
Just the thought makes my stomach sink
So I stay stoned so I don't have to think




Copyright © Daydreamer ... [ 2004-07-16 12:02:52]
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Re: Is a mother's love enough? (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:21:39 PM AEST
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Damn this is a gritty read, well written guts and all


Re: Is a mother's love enough? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 12:24:10 PM AEST
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vivid and tough - nice write.




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