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Array ( [sid] => 56339 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => As the clock ticks [time] => 2004-07-15 22:19:47 [hometext] => This is a song I wrote this weekend for my boyfriend. He and I are slowly drifting apart. Please don't judge him just by this. I just loved this song and wanted to post it. Comments welcome! [bodytext] => I'm sitting here
Stareing at the clock
Wondering what time the tears are gonna stop
12 o'clock has passed
1 o'clock is gone
and now it's 2.
Could this be the end of me and you?

So many laughs we've shared
So many tears I've cried
But no matter what
I'm still in love with you
but there's nothing I can do.

If your heart is not with me
Then give mine back
I'll put it up
on the shelf where it belongs.

Never have I felt so lonely
Since I've loved you
Knowing now in your bed
It's not only you

I'm sittin here
Stareing at the clock
Wondering what time the tears are gonna stop
It's past two now.
Could this be the end of me and you?

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Kirby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

As the clock ticks

Contributed by Kirby on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 10:19:47 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I'm sitting here
Stareing at the clock
Wondering what time the tears are gonna stop
12 o'clock has passed
1 o'clock is gone
and now it's 2.
Could this be the end of me and you?

So many laughs we've shared
So many tears I've cried
But no matter what
I'm still in love with you
but there's nothing I can do.

If your heart is not with me
Then give mine back
I'll put it up
on the shelf where it belongs.

Never have I felt so lonely
Since I've loved you
Knowing now in your bed
It's not only you

I'm sittin here
Stareing at the clock
Wondering what time the tears are gonna stop
It's past two now.
Could this be the end of me and you?

Copyright © Kirby ... [ 2004-07-15 22:19:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: As the clock ticks (User Rating: 1 )
by clowns_can_burn on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 10:29:45 PM AEST
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i think this is really good. it cool how you write something so deep about him, well anyway i hope things work out with yall. i am always here

Amanda

Re: As the clock ticks (User Rating: 1 )
by shrunkin_fool34142316 on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 10:38:18 PM AEST
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I like it....good job....especially the chorus... i hope things work out the way they r supposed to....everything happens 4 a reason....good luck..... ~Kayla~

Re: As the clock ticks (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 11:04:36 PM AEST
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Enjoyed this..... The best to you both..
Jenni

Re: As the clock ticks (User Rating: 1 )
by Asatru on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:03:09 AM AEST
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You wrote this very well, I enjoyed it a lot, especially the chorus. I hope you two make it through. Keep writing.

Re: As the clock ticks (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:07:55 AM AEST
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Wow, i love the start of this.
Very clever.
Good luck to you.
I hope he makes the right choice.
Great write,
Phil

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