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Array ( [sid] => 56168 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If Only [time] => 2004-07-14 14:44:55 [hometext] => I've tried to find a new escape by writing down my thoughts so heres another poem that i came up with....please comment. [bodytext] => I watch the blood fall down my leg
As tears fall down my cheek
I don’t know what I should do next
I’ve just become so weak

My heart is just so broken
I’m left with misery and pain
I want it all to go away
Or else I might become insane

I found an easy way out
But it only last so long
Late at night I cut my skin
Sometimes I feel it’s wrong

People say they care about me
But how can that be true
When they leave me feeling all alone
I wish they only knew

Maybe if they knew the pain
I’m tormented with in my head
They’d be more kind and caring
If only they knew the tears I shed

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If Only

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:44:55 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I watch the blood fall down my leg
As tears fall down my cheek
I don’t know what I should do next
I’ve just become so weak

My heart is just so broken
I’m left with misery and pain
I want it all to go away
Or else I might become insane

I found an easy way out
But it only last so long
Late at night I cut my skin
Sometimes I feel it’s wrong

People say they care about me
But how can that be true
When they leave me feeling all alone
I wish they only knew

Maybe if they knew the pain
I’m tormented with in my head
They’d be more kind and caring
If only they knew the tears I shed

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-07-14 14:44:55]
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Re: If Only (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:47:35 PM AEST
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brilliant i have the same problem myself its a struggle

Re: If Only (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 03:02:28 PM AEST
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I only ever cut once. I am glad i stopped.
Writing down thoughts is a good escape. Its one of mine.
I understand you. And we are always here for you
Many hugs
Phil xxx

Re: If Only (User Rating: 1 )
by mlcarter369 on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 03:17:13 PM AEST
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GREAT WRITE WRITING A POEM WITH GOOD RHYMING DOESNT HAPPEN THAT OFTEN

Re: If Only (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 07:39:13 AM AEST
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What is the cause to your pain?
If you know the cause you can stop the pain
PM me if you like
Upsetting write

BS x

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