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Array ( [sid] => 56134 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ouch!!!! [time] => 2004-07-14 09:29:40 [hometext] => We have been going through a rough patch recently & I tried to write this coming from Mark's hearts point of view..... [bodytext] => Ouch you’re hurting me,
Are you too blind to see,
What you are really doing,
My cracks need some gluing.

I am not made of iron or steel,
When you hurt me the pain is real,
I feel like I have been tore in two,
Please stop this thing you often do.

My feelings are very easily hurt,
Please pick me up from the dirt,
Treat me as you would a flower,
From love I get my power.

I have been damaged before,
Been trod on & pushed out the door,
So you need handle with care,
Help me get over my wear & tear.

My home is right by your side,
Don’t cause me to run & hide,
All I ask is for you not to shout,
You don’t mean it, I have no doubt.

Mark is my human host,
He is my lifetime leaning post,
We are both cut by your words,
& No insult goes unheard.

We will forgive you non stop,
Please can you let your guard drop,
Just remember we are lovers,
That’s why it’s so hard to recover.





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Ouch!!!!

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:29:40 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Ouch you’re hurting me,
Are you too blind to see,
What you are really doing,
My cracks need some gluing.

I am not made of iron or steel,
When you hurt me the pain is real,
I feel like I have been tore in two,
Please stop this thing you often do.

My feelings are very easily hurt,
Please pick me up from the dirt,
Treat me as you would a flower,
From love I get my power.

I have been damaged before,
Been trod on & pushed out the door,
So you need handle with care,
Help me get over my wear & tear.

My home is right by your side,
Don’t cause me to run & hide,
All I ask is for you not to shout,
You don’t mean it, I have no doubt.

Mark is my human host,
He is my lifetime leaning post,
We are both cut by your words,
& No insult goes unheard.

We will forgive you non stop,
Please can you let your guard drop,
Just remember we are lovers,
That’s why it’s so hard to recover.









Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-07-14 09:29:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Ouch!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:23:25 AM AEST
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Aww, this one is sad, Ican tell you feel bad... Just show Mark all of the love that you have for him. Best of luck sweety.


Re: Ouch!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 10:37:36 AM AEST
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Please continue to try to see through his eyes. That may help you understand that you can damage what you have by not finding solutions to your problems. Keep working, sweetie, don't give up.

Rita


Re: Ouch!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 06:33:32 PM AEST
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I agree with Rita. Not only is this perspective good to consider for Mark's sake, it seems to be a good one for practicing your remarkable poetic skills.
Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea


Re: Ouch!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 06:30:16 AM AEST
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Another good write here......
Hugs and all the best to you and Mark...
Jenni


Re: Ouch!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 04:58:12 AM AEST
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that was well written and lovely to read x




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