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Forever condemned a slave to fill your cart
You feel controlling
Im still dominaring
The ride home your face still such a glee
Images of the whip my back still your fact
Ariving just in time
"Here ill get that"
Use your bathroom for it will be your last
Appoaching the unsettling
Your smell to end all such a site
Its time to end it
Your gut my vital
My worst enemy
Your wonderful lefty
Your face filled such a shock
As I dig your heart still a beating
Now to hold with such a smirk
For all it took was one quick jurk
My eyes close
For the pain will stop
My life now gone
For the slave and master forever gone

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The master and his slave.

Contributed by heartfilledblood on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:56:02 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Blood fill stains fill your heart
Forever condemned a slave to fill your cart
You feel controlling
Im still dominaring
The ride home your face still such a glee
Images of the whip my back still your fact
Ariving just in time
"Here ill get that"
Use your bathroom for it will be your last
Appoaching the unsettling
Your smell to end all such a site
Its time to end it
Your gut my vital
My worst enemy
Your wonderful lefty
Your face filled such a shock
As I dig your heart still a beating
Now to hold with such a smirk
For all it took was one quick jurk
My eyes close
For the pain will stop
My life now gone
For the slave and master forever gone

Copyright © heartfilledblood ... [ 2004-07-14 02:56:02]
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Re: The master and his slave. (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:00:41 AM AEST
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Following along with your poem was an interesting experience.

It was wondrous to read and it is a subject I read on in depth often.

Very well done.

Kie : )

Re: The master and his slave. (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 09:54:32 AM AEST
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great , dark write,

pixie xx

Re: The master and his slave. (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:26:14 PM AEST
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I could follow this, but parts confused me
and i couldnt understand what it was saying..
It added a mysterious effect to it though..

BS x

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