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Array ( [sid] => 55774 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => just one more day...... [time] => 2004-07-11 22:54:30 [hometext] => this is a poem i wrote about my ex who i fell in love with........ [bodytext] => just one more day with you is all i ask
to travel back into the past
just to see your gleaming smile
just to sit with you while
just one more day to prove
that we were meant to be
but that would prove nothing
cuz you no longer love me.
just one more day to love you
would make my life complete
cuz when we were together
you swept me off my feet.
just one more night to hold you
in my arms so very tight
just one more time to be with you
would make everything so right.
just one more time to walk with you
to watch the long sunrise
just one more time to comfort you
and stare into your eyes.
just one more time to laugh with you
just one more time to cry
just one more time to lay with you
and be by your side.
just one more time to tell you
exactly how i feel
just one more time to tell you
that i will never heal. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 24 [informant] => hopelessromantic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
just one more day......

Contributed by hopelessromantic on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:54:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



just one more day with you is all i ask
to travel back into the past
just to see your gleaming smile
just to sit with you while
just one more day to prove
that we were meant to be
but that would prove nothing
cuz you no longer love me.
just one more day to love you
would make my life complete
cuz when we were together
you swept me off my feet.
just one more night to hold you
in my arms so very tight
just one more time to be with you
would make everything so right.
just one more time to walk with you
to watch the long sunrise
just one more time to comfort you
and stare into your eyes.
just one more time to laugh with you
just one more time to cry
just one more time to lay with you
and be by your side.
just one more time to tell you
exactly how i feel
just one more time to tell you
that i will never heal.




Copyright © hopelessromantic ... [ 2004-07-11 22:54:30]
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Re: just one more day...... (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:06:08 PM AEST
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beautiful poem...emotions are straight from the heart good write
tasha


Re: just one more day...... (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 09:55:19 PM AEST
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this poem is absolutely amazing....i am in that very postion now an di know how badly it hurts....kepp up the good work this is really a great poem

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears


Re: just one more day...... (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 12:38:00 AM AEST
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You commented on one of mine poems and i thought that sicne we have had the same experience i should check out some of your work. This is a beautiful write... i just know how you feel...it's really hard. The emotions shown are strong. Good write and dont stop writing.
Love always
corrupted_minds




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