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Array ( [sid] => 55685 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Day We Met [time] => 2004-07-11 01:30:11 [hometext] => I wrote this for my wife in June in anticipation of our anniversary. [bodytext] => I can still remember the day we met,
A day of fate that you can't forget.
I had always dreamed of love at first sight,
Heaven only knew that this was to be the night.
You we spending the night with a friend,
Her brother invited me, I wished it wouldn't end.
I can still recall the sparkle in your eye,
Wondering to myself, "Can I be her guy?"
I was afraid you wouldn't like me,
Maybe I too ugly or just too dorky.
But minute by minute it became so clear,
That, "Hey, I just might have a chance here."
I kept sneaking looks at you throughout the night,
Your beauty and charm broke my lonelyness with your light.
I did not want the night to ever end,
I could feel in my heart, our souls starting to blend.
The drive home was the longest of my life,
"Coould she be the one, could she be my wife?"
And all through the night I pondered my fate,
Knowing without doubt that you would be my mate. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 569 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Thunderwolf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 28 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
The Day We Met

Contributed by Thunderwolf on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:30:11 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I can still remember the day we met,
A day of fate that you can't forget.
I had always dreamed of love at first sight,
Heaven only knew that this was to be the night.
You we spending the night with a friend,
Her brother invited me, I wished it wouldn't end.
I can still recall the sparkle in your eye,
Wondering to myself, "Can I be her guy?"
I was afraid you wouldn't like me,
Maybe I too ugly or just too dorky.
But minute by minute it became so clear,
That, "Hey, I just might have a chance here."
I kept sneaking looks at you throughout the night,
Your beauty and charm broke my lonelyness with your light.
I did not want the night to ever end,
I could feel in my heart, our souls starting to blend.
The drive home was the longest of my life,
"Coould she be the one, could she be my wife?"
And all through the night I pondered my fate,
Knowing without doubt that you would be my mate.




Copyright © Thunderwolf ... [ 2004-07-11 01:30:11]
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Re: The Day We Met (User Rating: 1 )
by Gentledove on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:40:27 AM AEST
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I love you. You know everyone here is going to get sick of us. lol.
Gentledove


Re: The Day We Met (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:46:54 AM AEST
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Another great write!!! So tender and loving...
Keep the pen flowing.....

To Dove...No way!!! We all enjoy a great love story....

Hugs to you both..
Jenni


Re: The Day We Met (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:05:29 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful and soo romantic:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: The Day We Met (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:54:55 AM AEST
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Nawwwww, if I did it would only because I am envious, lol. Great show of love for Gay, TW.

Rita


Re: The Day We Met (User Rating: 1 )
by Buggsy on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 11:51:41 PM AEST
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Absolutly beautiful. I can only begin to imagine
such love as never having experienced it myself.
(A little to young might be a reason).




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