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Array ( [sid] => 55643 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Confused [time] => 2004-07-10 20:42:58 [hometext] => Im really depressed and confused PLEASE COMMENT OR GIVE ADVICE i really need some help [bodytext] => I knew this week
would be different
when I saw you
but there was still someone else
waiting for me as I had the time of my life
in that place everyone hates
but never wants to leave
Camp oswegatchie is the place to go and make friends
but leave an enemy to your own thoughts and feelings
I couldn't help it
you had charisma everyone loved you
you had the cutest smile
and the best laugh
and then you kissed me
one simple afternoon
but it happened so fast
my heart is quickly pulled through my fingers
but it stilled happened and again
help I am so confused
I have someone here in my heart already
but not sure how much longer they're going to be there
I had so much fun but didn't want to leave
knowing what the consequences would be
and will be
Having fun is the worst thing
and the best thing
I had the best week
and the worst one
this is one week that will be in my memories forever
and I can't help but look back and think
It's what I had to do
and finally found out what was truely in my heart
I'm sorry
I'm just so
confused [comments] => 1 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MnMnMsrcool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Confused

Contributed by MnMnMsrcool on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 08:42:58 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I knew this week
would be different
when I saw you
but there was still someone else
waiting for me as I had the time of my life
in that place everyone hates
but never wants to leave
Camp oswegatchie is the place to go and make friends
but leave an enemy to your own thoughts and feelings
I couldn't help it
you had charisma everyone loved you
you had the cutest smile
and the best laugh
and then you kissed me
one simple afternoon
but it happened so fast
my heart is quickly pulled through my fingers
but it stilled happened and again
help I am so confused
I have someone here in my heart already
but not sure how much longer they're going to be there
I had so much fun but didn't want to leave
knowing what the consequences would be
and will be
Having fun is the worst thing
and the best thing
I had the best week
and the worst one
this is one week that will be in my memories forever
and I can't help but look back and think
It's what I had to do
and finally found out what was truely in my heart
I'm sorry
I'm just so
confused

Copyright © MnMnMsrcool ... [ 2004-07-10 20:42:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:25:51 PM AEST
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Well put - I think I can see what you're going through. The only advice I can give is that my summer camp relationship when I was a teen (and when I met him I was going with someone else) was hard to keep up with because we didn't live close. The older you get the longer distance relationship you can keep up.

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