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Array ( [sid] => 55524 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Amnesia [time] => 2004-07-09 19:49:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Something hit me in the head
My memory's coming back again
As fast as it left me long ago
I'm missing what we had back then.

I thought it was over
I thought it was done
Almost convinced myself
That those feelings were gone.

My mind's still replaying
The dance we danced for hours
Until I fell tired into your arms
And succumbed to your power.

Your grip was so strong
Thought you held me too tight
Now I wish you would hold me
Like you held me that night.

I never quite gave you all of me
We were never quite as close as you wanted to be
There was always a piece I kept inside
More out of fear than out of pride.

Now I have to hold myself back
I can't let this flame grow into a fire
I know that if I held you again
I'd let you have your every desire. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 24 [informant] => comfortablynumb [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Amnesia

Contributed by comfortablynumb on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:49:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Something hit me in the head
My memory's coming back again
As fast as it left me long ago
I'm missing what we had back then.

I thought it was over
I thought it was done
Almost convinced myself
That those feelings were gone.

My mind's still replaying
The dance we danced for hours
Until I fell tired into your arms
And succumbed to your power.

Your grip was so strong
Thought you held me too tight
Now I wish you would hold me
Like you held me that night.

I never quite gave you all of me
We were never quite as close as you wanted to be
There was always a piece I kept inside
More out of fear than out of pride.

Now I have to hold myself back
I can't let this flame grow into a fire
I know that if I held you again
I'd let you have your every desire.

Copyright © comfortablynumb ... [ 2004-07-09 19:49:45]
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Re: Amnesia (User Rating: 1 )
by wikedladi on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:17:21 PM AEST
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This is a really great poem! i can complete understand not being able to give all of yourself to someone, you run the risk of being pushed into the ground. keep up the good work!

Re: Amnesia (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:40:17 PM AEST
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You've done well portraying the mixed feelings bottled up inside once you've lost something you wish you'd never have let go to begin with. Keep on writing!
Angel always...joni

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