Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 03-June 06:44:01 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 55025 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hey now [time] => 2004-07-06 16:45:21 [hometext] => I can't remember the last time I willingly, wholeheartedly played I Declare War with someone to the end. Life gives you too much crap in the meantime. Here's to nothing to do with the time but pass it. [bodytext] => Hey now,
How long has it been
Since I was kicking my brother’s ankle
Under the table at dinner?
Sitting in almost miniature wooden chairs
Little tykes was but a blueprint
Asking for adult intervention cuz he keep
LOOKING AT ME
Thrown a cup of water on the hopscotch board
I just composed
Way before we supposed
skillet was a street invention
I lived as a prisoner of mama’s private menu
And I ate what she made
cuz it was always good food
And we had two baths at the passings of
Mister Sweltering Sun
U betcha, it was
Powder on the neck
Vaseline on the elbows and knees
Pink oil moisturizer in my hair
I had no idea
that it was privilege not to hafta
eat at McDonald’s
I was just jealous of everyone else’s happy meal toys
And I was employed full time to just
Pass it idly
And I went into Grandma’s Cedonia backyard every Sunday
Digging for china
Searching for mantises meditating
And hunting succulent honeysuckles
Nowhere to hide from to the sun
But did we want to?
I never knew then that life would
Run over and not even wait up for me
And stab me in the back
Knocking me down into the trashcan
Then
Hey now,
How long has it been
Since I played I declare war all the way to the end?




[comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 21 [informant] => frohemiasweetie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
hey now

Contributed by frohemiasweetie on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:45:21 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Hey now,
How long has it been
Since I was kicking my brother’s ankle
Under the table at dinner?
Sitting in almost miniature wooden chairs
Little tykes was but a blueprint
Asking for adult intervention cuz he keep
LOOKING AT ME
Thrown a cup of water on the hopscotch board
I just composed
Way before we supposed
skillet was a street invention
I lived as a prisoner of mama’s private menu
And I ate what she made
cuz it was always good food
And we had two baths at the passings of
Mister Sweltering Sun
U betcha, it was
Powder on the neck
Vaseline on the elbows and knees
Pink oil moisturizer in my hair
I had no idea
that it was privilege not to hafta
eat at McDonald’s
I was just jealous of everyone else’s happy meal toys
And I was employed full time to just
Pass it idly
And I went into Grandma’s Cedonia backyard every Sunday
Digging for china
Searching for mantises meditating
And hunting succulent honeysuckles
Nowhere to hide from to the sun
But did we want to?
I never knew then that life would
Run over and not even wait up for me
And stab me in the back
Knocking me down into the trashcan
Then
Hey now,
How long has it been
Since I played I declare war all the way to the end?








Copyright © frohemiasweetie ... [ 2004-07-06 16:45:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: hey now (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 07:15:42 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I got nice visuals from that childhood scenery. I wish I could get back all the time I spent on some things too...


Re: hey now (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 09:20:24 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Great poem! Really brought me back to my childhood....or my earlier childhood I guess you could say. Good memories...
Anyway, great write!
-Drapes


Re: hey now (User Rating: 1 )
by kassi124 on Saturday, 30th October 2010 @ 03:21:44 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
nicely done




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com