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Array ( [sid] => 55020 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Final Opposition [time] => 2004-07-06 16:05:47 [hometext] => This song talks about how soceity made me within. [bodytext] => I've seen faces in the dark I cannot explain
As I keep my eyes shut tightly
The darkness covers my face
I can't stop my pain forever
I can no longer feel your touch
This is the demon they've made me into
I can stop myself from being left behind

They can't see what they've made me into
They created a monster inside of me

Now they are gonna die
(Because I can't take this)
This pill is too much to swallow
I can stop myself from destorying life
But (I know) that now I can keep you close to me
But (this) is not me inside of this body

I woke up this morning, blood covers my mortal body
I come to find you had died by my hands (by my blade)
Take this pain and go away
I can't kill another mortal
I can't keep this wrecthed life any longer
JUST MAKE THIS STOP!

They can't see what they've made me into
They created a monster inside of me

How can they be so blind
To never see their ceature
The beast that murders the innocent
The beast known as me
They made me what I was
Then you came to my life
And with one smile you turned back into myself
The side no one knew because I was the last in line
Now I'm back to kill the ones who killed me inside
And I'm not gonna stop this time until my mission is complete [comments] => 2 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Bones [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Final Opposition

Contributed by Bones on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:05:47 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



I've seen faces in the dark I cannot explain
As I keep my eyes shut tightly
The darkness covers my face
I can't stop my pain forever
I can no longer feel your touch
This is the demon they've made me into
I can stop myself from being left behind

They can't see what they've made me into
They created a monster inside of me

Now they are gonna die
(Because I can't take this)
This pill is too much to swallow
I can stop myself from destorying life
But (I know) that now I can keep you close to me
But (this) is not me inside of this body

I woke up this morning, blood covers my mortal body
I come to find you had died by my hands (by my blade)
Take this pain and go away
I can't kill another mortal
I can't keep this wrecthed life any longer
JUST MAKE THIS STOP!

They can't see what they've made me into
They created a monster inside of me

How can they be so blind
To never see their ceature
The beast that murders the innocent
The beast known as me
They made me what I was
Then you came to my life
And with one smile you turned back into myself
The side no one knew because I was the last in line
Now I'm back to kill the ones who killed me inside
And I'm not gonna stop this time until my mission is complete




Copyright © Bones ... [ 2004-07-06 16:05:47]
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Re: Final Opposition (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:19:42 PM AEST
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Wow, I would love to hear this, it seemed to play for me as I read it. Very good, dark, and beautiful all at the same time.


Re: Final Opposition (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 08:39:02 PM AEST
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Wow this was a really great song/poem. I believe that this would make a great song. Keep em coming. Love::::Kirby




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