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Array ( [sid] => 54863 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It’s good to join in. Or is it? [time] => 2004-07-05 15:04:34 [hometext] => I always seem to work my way into these circumstances. It’s so stupid, I never seem to learn to get away until it’s too late! There’s a lot more things that happened and i haven’t written about. I kind of thought it’s long enough. Lol. [bodytext] => I feel good inside,
Because I go round with you.
But I’m not laughing inside,
I’m just feeling blue.
You muck about,
And I join in.
There’s no release let out,
To keep a secret of your sins.
… But I join in.
Then more and more,
I become your friends.
Pulled down more,
It never ends.
But it’s good to fit in…
Atmosphere’s change,
The world twists.
But this bad friendship,
Still exists.
And I lie for you,
So you don’t take blame.
‘Coz I know if that happens,
You’ll call me names.
Act like it’s my fault,
Because you NEVER change!
But I know I need to fit in.
So I lie for you,
To cover your sins.
So I’m with you,
And you pick on this girl.
I don’t want you to.
You say I don’t rule your world.
You pick on her.
And she fights back.
Good for her,
You deserved a smack.
Wait! Did I say that?
No, it wasn’t me.
Honestly!
… Time skips by,
I keep my gob shut.
I don’t want a fight.
Get more scars, more cuts.
I keep my gob shut.
But inside, it all hurts too much!
But still I join in…
I cover your sins.
And so I’m accused,
Of being like you.
And so the begins…
For other reasons I get picked on,
When I’m not with you,
Nothing gets done,
‘Coz they think I’m one of you.
Only, I’m not.
I just don’t wanna be alone.
I’m not a bully!
I didn’t want you to do it.
But you still went ahead.
Then you picked on me,
For saying it.
You made me feel like *****!
And we both know there’s nothing I can do about it…
That’s why you started,
Wasn’t it?
And so all of this!
What does it mean?
You’re twisted. Or maybe it’s me?
I don’t know.
I just know I NEVER see.
Until my life,
Comes crashing down on me!
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It’s good to join in. Or is it?

Contributed by deathdrop on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 03:04:34 PM in AEST
Topic: schoolproblems



I feel good inside,
Because I go round with you.
But I’m not laughing inside,
I’m just feeling blue.
You muck about,
And I join in.
There’s no release let out,
To keep a secret of your sins.
… But I join in.
Then more and more,
I become your friends.
Pulled down more,
It never ends.
But it’s good to fit in…
Atmosphere’s change,
The world twists.
But this bad friendship,
Still exists.
And I lie for you,
So you don’t take blame.
‘Coz I know if that happens,
You’ll call me names.
Act like it’s my fault,
Because you NEVER change!
But I know I need to fit in.
So I lie for you,
To cover your sins.
So I’m with you,
And you pick on this girl.
I don’t want you to.
You say I don’t rule your world.
You pick on her.
And she fights back.
Good for her,
You deserved a smack.
Wait! Did I say that?
No, it wasn’t me.
Honestly!
… Time skips by,
I keep my gob shut.
I don’t want a fight.
Get more scars, more cuts.
I keep my gob shut.
But inside, it all hurts too much!
But still I join in…
I cover your sins.
And so I’m accused,
Of being like you.
And so the begins…
For other reasons I get picked on,
When I’m not with you,
Nothing gets done,
‘Coz they think I’m one of you.
Only, I’m not.
I just don’t wanna be alone.
I’m not a bully!
I didn’t want you to do it.
But you still went ahead.
Then you picked on me,
For saying it.
You made me feel like *****!
And we both know there’s nothing I can do about it…
That’s why you started,
Wasn’t it?
And so all of this!
What does it mean?
You’re twisted. Or maybe it’s me?
I don’t know.
I just know I NEVER see.
Until my life,
Comes crashing down on me!




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Re: It’s good to join in. Or is it? (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 03:28:49 PM AEST
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aw thats really gd!
thanks for your comment i will pm you tomorrow
thanks xx
luv han x


Re: It’s good to join in. Or is it? (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:47:44 PM AEST
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Some where in that poem it flowed beautifully
the rest was good also
but a certain section was the best
it was...

So you don’t take blame.
‘Coz I know if that happens,
You’ll call me names.
Act like it’s my fault,
Because you NEVER change!
But I know I need to fit in.
So I lie for you,
To cover your sins.
So I’m with you,
And you pick on this girl.
I don’t want you to.
You say I don’t rule your world.
You pick on her.
And she fights back.
Good for her,
You deserved a smack.
Wait! Did I say that?
No, it wasn’t me.
Honestly!
… Time skips by,
I keep my gob shut.
I don’t want a fight.
Get more scars, more cuts.
I keep my gob shut.
But inside, it all hurts too much!
But still I join in…
I cover your sins.
And so I’m accused,
Of being like you.
And so the begins…

That was great, you should write a poem with that sort of flow

5/5

BS x


Re: It’s good to join in. Or is it? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 10:08:50 PM AEST
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very good write.




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