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Array ( [sid] => 5476 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Ups and Downs [time] => 2002-10-23 11:15:00 [hometext] => the title says it all. [bodytext] => Somethings used to make me laugh
and somethings used to make me smile
Now those things have gone away,
I forget the smile on my face
and I'm heading back to where I was
in the first place

Take me up, now put me down
Fill me up and see me drown
throw me out in vain again
and wake me up when it begins
then sometime when it's over

Love me not and feel the rain
of the clouds above your head again
When lightning crashes then you'll run
and my eyes will see the bright lit sun
just one more time so...

Take me up, now put me down
Fill me up and see me drown
throw me out in vain again
and wake me up when it begins
then sometime when it's over

Nothing used to make me laugh
and nothing used to make me smile
Now those things have come my way
I remember the smile on my face
and I'm headed back to where I was
in the first place

Fill me up, and break me down
show me up, oppose me now
Hate me now, and love me later
since this day, the guilt you cater
As I say...

Take me up, now put me down
Fill me up and see me drown
throw me out in vain again
and wake me up when it begins
then sometime when it's over
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Ups and Downs

Contributed by InexactExactness on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 11:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Somethings used to make me laugh
and somethings used to make me smile
Now those things have gone away,
I forget the smile on my face
and I'm heading back to where I was
in the first place

Take me up, now put me down
Fill me up and see me drown
throw me out in vain again
and wake me up when it begins
then sometime when it's over

Love me not and feel the rain
of the clouds above your head again
When lightning crashes then you'll run
and my eyes will see the bright lit sun
just one more time so...

Take me up, now put me down
Fill me up and see me drown
throw me out in vain again
and wake me up when it begins
then sometime when it's over

Nothing used to make me laugh
and nothing used to make me smile
Now those things have come my way
I remember the smile on my face
and I'm headed back to where I was
in the first place

Fill me up, and break me down
show me up, oppose me now
Hate me now, and love me later
since this day, the guilt you cater
As I say...

Take me up, now put me down
Fill me up and see me drown
throw me out in vain again
and wake me up when it begins
then sometime when it's over




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Re: Ups and Downs (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:48:26 PM AEST
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I really like this! I wish I could here the song in all it's glory! Good one! Christina


Re: Ups and Downs (User Rating: 1 )
by idiotbox on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 01:21:11 PM AEST
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this is awesome who sings it?? i wanna hear it


Re: Ups and Downs (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 07:14:26 AM AEST
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Shame on you for making me sad
Shame on me for allowing time had
I wish i may become your dream
Upon your pillows of satin cream...lol
Ok i had to stop there im laughin!..This is soo beautiful the way you wrote the poem out....now see when you read this comment perhaps you can smile and laugh same as i did lol...i fell back on commenting on your poetry ....forgive me kind sir.....i shall continue....

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