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Array ( [sid] => 54667 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hopefully [time] => 2004-07-03 18:31:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => touching your body is better
than i ever thought it could be
and when i wake up from long days
you'll be there next to me, hopefully
wet flesh makes instant contact
your body feels it but your lips cant say it
put a trust in me you've never shown
and i promise you we can make it
dont be scared of this gentle touch
dont be frightened if i get a little rough
its just the feeling that i get from seeing you
and how i want to have you so much [comments] => 4 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 2 [informant] => valek [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
hopefully

Contributed by valek on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:31:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



touching your body is better
than i ever thought it could be
and when i wake up from long days
you'll be there next to me, hopefully
wet flesh makes instant contact
your body feels it but your lips cant say it
put a trust in me you've never shown
and i promise you we can make it
dont be scared of this gentle touch
dont be frightened if i get a little rough
its just the feeling that i get from seeing you
and how i want to have you so much




Copyright © valek ... [ 2004-07-03 18:31:41]
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Re: hopefully (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:44:54 PM AEST
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Cant quite work out with your writing what it is that pulls me in:)
Maybe its the honesty,raw feelings?
Whatever it is..I love it!!

LW


Re: hopefully (User Rating: 1 )
by DragonLuvSong on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:45:51 PM AEST
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this is bursting with love...that sounds corny but I don't care. its just what you want to be written to you, whoever is on the recieving end of this is very lucky, i would love to hear it from someone, its so wonderful.


Re: hopefully (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 06:56:48 PM AEST
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this is so sweet and tender....i love it!!!!!!

blessed be!!!
sirena


Re: hopefully (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 10:00:45 PM AEST
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This is very sweet. I truly liked this one.

J~




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