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heres a present from your unloving father
theres no significance to this awful day
its as miserable as any other i would say
come into the room where i am sitting
come a bit closer stop you're fidgeting
you've curled your hair it looks so nice
im gonna add excitment today, just a lil spice
bring that curling iron along with you
that broken bottle looks nice get that too
your body is shaking horribly is something wrong
hurry up girl this wont take very long
you know the routine begin to undress
with the steaming hot iron i sweetly caress
with it deeply inside you begin to scream
you cry out i wish this was just a dream
i assure you my dear this is your life
your mom left you play the role of my wife
the curling iron is boring onto the bottle
your beautiful face looks just like a model
the glass cuts you open blood pours out
it rips you apart as you begint to shout
your pain is my pleasure im deeply satisfied
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twisted father

Contributed by deadbloodyrose on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:27:47 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

happy birthday to you my most hated daughter
heres a present from your unloving father
theres no significance to this awful day
its as miserable as any other i would say
come into the room where i am sitting
come a bit closer stop you're fidgeting
you've curled your hair it looks so nice
im gonna add excitment today, just a lil spice
bring that curling iron along with you
that broken bottle looks nice get that too
your body is shaking horribly is something wrong
hurry up girl this wont take very long
you know the routine begin to undress
with the steaming hot iron i sweetly caress
with it deeply inside you begin to scream
you cry out i wish this was just a dream
i assure you my dear this is your life
your mom left you play the role of my wife
the curling iron is boring onto the bottle
your beautiful face looks just like a model
the glass cuts you open blood pours out
it rips you apart as you begint to shout
your pain is my pleasure im deeply satisfied
as you walk out the door im filled with pride

Copyright © deadbloodyrose ... [ 2004-07-03 00:27:47]
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Re: twisted father (User Rating: 1 )
by MissMandy on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:33:56 AM AEST
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Oh that's scary... My heart goes out to your friend.

Re: twisted father (User Rating: 1 )
by bj111 on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:28:49 AM AEST
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Agreed...disturbing. A very difficult subject. ...bob

Re: twisted father (User Rating: 1 )
by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 07:45:58 AM AEST
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***** excelent lol sorry but it looks as if you put alot of thought into ur poem which is a good thing and the words make you think i guess x

Re: twisted father (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 08:45:59 AM AEST
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i wouldn't call this disturbing, disgusting or sick, but no, not distubing.
it's sick how the these thoughts could ever pass through a fathers head.
it's disgusting to think that a father could ever to this to his own daughter.

Re: twisted father (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 09:07:30 AM AEST
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this is very sad and yes very twisted.. i can see no reason why someone would conflict this on a child even her own father.. i know she had to hurt but i know you had to hurt knowing all this happened as well.. so im sorry.. at least shes not in harms way anymore though..

~neglected1~

Re: twisted father (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 09:58:57 AM AEST
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This is a very good write! Sad and twisted, but good. The reality is that many parents (moms too) think a child is their possession and not a living being. And so many live this hell everyday. They live with all kinds of abuses. And it's terrible that no one steps up to help. They just stand by and let it happen. I hope your friend escaped and is not buried in the back yard! (Another sad reality) Good luck to her, and Kudos to you. Writing this from the point of view that you did, must have taken a great deal of thought. Again, Kudos!
Thumps ; 0 ) (I know this was a long comment, but I am very passionate about this subject, can you tell? )

Re: twisted father (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:26:54 AM AEST
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very grim,....and extremly dark...

pixie xx

Re: twisted father (User Rating: 1 )
by Monkeybones99 on Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 03:45:45 PM AEST
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It is very sad what happen to your friend.....this however is a very good poem.

Re: twisted father (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 03:20:03 PM AEST
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very deep and dark.able to capture that twisted perverse momment in time in such well chosen words was incredible.this poem will stick with me.
~vermillion~

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