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[aid] => mick
[title] => You
[time] => 2004-07-02 18:35:14
[hometext] => One of my first poems ever, I'd really like some feedback
[bodytext] => All the perfect words, they seem so wrong. It's the fact that they don't portrait what I really feel, for you. Nothing can, not even the sweetest thing you would ever hear would suffice. Nothing can describe the Divine energy that surrounds you. One would have to be mad not to notice. But In one way, I am. I am... I am, mad, mad about you. I want shout it, out loud, for the whole world to hear, but I don't. I know. How cruel the world and its inhabitants can be. If you don't tread carefully you might end up somewhere you don't want to be. With you, all worries fade away, I forget about the rest of the world. The time I spend with you, I wish would last forever. It's like we are in our own separate universe, where all that matters is now, no need to worry, no need to think about tomorrow. You make me want to enjoy life. When we are together and everything is ok, I can't help but think about summer, imagining the cool summer breeze blow through your hair. It's weird how one can get captivated by someone, like me, I got captured. And it's weird how feelings can change, how you suddenly look at someone in a whole new perspective, from casual to intimate, from friends to lovers. Happened with me. The world _is_ ever changing. No two days are the same. You might find yourself wondering what emotions will be the ones leading you through the day, happiness, excitement, longing for someone, being with someone, with me, it's often the fact that i can go home, and relax, listen to music. Music, for me is what can make me happy. When I look at you, music runs through my head, I can't help but smile. One must learn, learn to understand, understand the little joys life can bring, the joy, of having someone special in your life. Me, I want to understand. I want to love... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Noax [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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