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Array ( [sid] => 54221 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => use me please just one more time [time] => 2004-06-30 04:22:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => use me please come on and use me
i took it plenty i can take it one more time
just to see that cruel but beautiful smile
just to feel my skin crawl
lets me know i can still feel alive

dead inside wanting to be
loved all this time
it feel like i,m the only one left behind
i take a scar everytime i make them cry
i guess its what i need to let them know i,m alive

screaming doesnt help
so why not just let them win
to them i,m not real
i don't have feelings within

so please come on and use me just one more time
make sure i bleed as i want to on the outside
so then maybe u,ll see
i am alive i have a soul

bleeding sort of helps but no one helps me heal
so i guess they still don't notice
and i guess they never will [comments] => 1 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 6 [informant] => grip-wth-broken-fingers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

use me please just one more time

Contributed by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 04:22:34 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

use me please come on and use me
i took it plenty i can take it one more time
just to see that cruel but beautiful smile
just to feel my skin crawl
lets me know i can still feel alive

dead inside wanting to be
loved all this time
it feel like i,m the only one left behind
i take a scar everytime i make them cry
i guess its what i need to let them know i,m alive

screaming doesnt help
so why not just let them win
to them i,m not real
i don't have feelings within

so please come on and use me just one more time
make sure i bleed as i want to on the outside
so then maybe u,ll see
i am alive i have a soul

bleeding sort of helps but no one helps me heal
so i guess they still don't notice
and i guess they never will

Copyright © grip-wth-broken-fingers ... [ 2004-06-30 04:22:34]
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Re: use me please just one more time (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 05:59:51 AM AEST
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As poems, yours dont really do much for me,
because im fussy like that but, i hear a cry
for help through your words..

BS x

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